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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant! Just the thing I've been looking for; a perfect blend of dub-con, dark themes and hot sex with the best ending ever!
Bookmarked for future reads xxx
Bookmarked for future reads xxx
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this. It was amazing. xD Thanks for the wonderful fic. I enjoyed reading it. <3
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love all your fics, I didn’t even know that silent hill slash existed, and thanks to you now I love the fandom.
Don’t mind bad reviews, they are immature, she is the one that needs a beta, and for something that simple as two lines, her english is worse than mine and I am Mexican speaking Spanish all the time.
kisses
keep writing
Don’t mind bad reviews, they are immature, she is the one that needs a beta, and for something that simple as two lines, her english is worse than mine and I am Mexican speaking Spanish all the time.
kisses
keep writing
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Bitch" reviews: Look, if you're going to use "big" words, at least use them properly. Your writing style is juvenile, idiotic, and unrealistic. Get a fucking BETA.
Oh TSK. Tsk, tsk, tsk. First of all, if you're going to use "quotes", use *them* properly. It's best if you say "...if you're going to use "big words", at least..." Otherwise, it looks like your only emphasis is "big", not the words.
It's fun to be overly critical, but I'm sure you're aware of this.
I've read some absolutely terrible fics before... and this simply isn't one of them. It's no War and Peace, but what is? Juvenile, idiotic and unrealistic? It's video-game fic. It's kind of... *supposed* to be unrealistic. That's the linch pin of this whole story in and of itself. The first two "BIG WORDS! OMG!" you used, 'juvenile and idiotic'... point out exactly what *is* idiotic, if you will. Or is that just a "big INSULT", rather than trying to show off your vernacular?
It's funny to say this, 'cause it's not an insult: Bitch, *please*. Offer something constructive to a story that is just fine, and needs a skosh of helpful criticism.
Oh TSK. Tsk, tsk, tsk. First of all, if you're going to use "quotes", use *them* properly. It's best if you say "...if you're going to use "big words", at least..." Otherwise, it looks like your only emphasis is "big", not the words.
It's fun to be overly critical, but I'm sure you're aware of this.
I've read some absolutely terrible fics before... and this simply isn't one of them. It's no War and Peace, but what is? Juvenile, idiotic and unrealistic? It's video-game fic. It's kind of... *supposed* to be unrealistic. That's the linch pin of this whole story in and of itself. The first two "BIG WORDS! OMG!" you used, 'juvenile and idiotic'... point out exactly what *is* idiotic, if you will. Or is that just a "big INSULT", rather than trying to show off your vernacular?
It's funny to say this, 'cause it's not an insult: Bitch, *please*. Offer something constructive to a story that is just fine, and needs a skosh of helpful criticism.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look, if you're going to use "big" words, at least use them properly. Your writing style is juvenile, idiotic, and unrealistic. Get a fucking BETA.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was neat how they made James into their slave. Good work!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*o* ... Woow. That was.. so cool. And hawt. Muah. <3
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this several times now, but have only now just realised that I hadn't reviewed, and for that I apologise.
I really love this. This is an ending that I didn't see coming, and it makes things so much more twisted to read, with James not being the victim. So very good.
I am having creepy fangirl love for your writing. Don't mind me! ;p
For me, the real kicker in this fic is seeing Sin in action against Alfred. It's my favourite section. Not really sure why, except that I'm just in awe of it's awesomeness.
I really love this. This is an ending that I didn't see coming, and it makes things so much more twisted to read, with James not being the victim. So very good.
I am having creepy fangirl love for your writing. Don't mind me! ;p
For me, the real kicker in this fic is seeing Sin in action against Alfred. It's my favourite section. Not really sure why, except that I'm just in awe of it's awesomeness.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I think I'm starting to become a fan of yours. :3 You are a genius, a God...Or Goddess. Whether gal or guy, you are some form of heavenly deity. You have a lot of talent. Maybe you should write some original stories, get them published, make a living out of it. I'd certainly buy any literary work from you if you did. Excellent job.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm becoming a real fan of your works on Silent Hill, and this one is no exception. You know how to write scenes which are both really erotic and scary, one of the things I prefer in a fanfic.
I haven't reviewed your other two fics yet because I skipped some parts while reading ; but what I read really hooked me, I hope you will continue both of them.
I haven't reviewed your other two fics yet because I skipped some parts while reading ; but what I read really hooked me, I hope you will continue both of them.