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by Reincarnate

person rikkimeko
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I didn't know you was gonna write a sequel. that's great! Poor jak feels so dirty and unsafe! I hope he kills erol but Erol is my favorite character! XD! I liked it again. It was simple to read, and you spelled everything right, and There was space for me to read the actual story! Most write pushe everything it together, lazy asses!