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Vastly superior. I do wonder how Shadow shall unlock the Master Emerald, and if he does, will he even be able to do anything to Tikal? Will she have gained control or friendship with Chaos that will save her from Shadow at the last second? Yeah this was a good update.

New chapter 8= 1 out of 5. Sick. Don't got anything to say about this so, have a nice day!

Uh, sorry for the half review, accidently sent it through. Anyway, not really understanding why Tikal is coming into this (But then again, the more to suffer, the more fun I have reading it!) but that was a LOT better then what you had before. I laughed a lot this time around (I just...love Fuckles. That word. So cute and funny and wrong, all at once...) Anyway, I really loved the new chapter better, it rocked!

As much as I don't want you to hurt Tails, I can't wait to see what happens to him...::sniffle:: Though one thing: is uh, everyone going to point out that they 'wish Shadow would die' or that he's a monster? Cause the next person that says it? Should you know. Get bitch slapped.

Update soon, I enjoy the read!

Hot damn, this story is bitchin! What day(s) do you normally update it? I want to keep track of this one.

I don't want to sound like a smart ass when I say this, so please, don't take it as much Froggy, but thank you. You honestly don't know has refreshing it is to actually register a complaint about a story without an author bitching at you and all their rabid fans chasing you with pitch forks. XD

To be honest, I didn't mean to rant the way I did, but it just sorta...typed out. ^_^* The fact of the matter was though, is that I saw so much potential in the story just from the summary and in the end, I kinda felt let down. As I said before, I never was a big fan of Shadow/Amy in the first place, because of the way it's done (and because honestly, I have my own views about said ship and why I despise it) but I have a tendacy to make exceptions when the story is epic, impressive, or just down right badass and original. (I actually hated Shadow/Sonic before I read another story on this site that completely changed my tune. . .)

What I was excepting honestly, was something I hadn't seen/read before in a Sonic story of that pairing or at least if I had, it being done in such a great way where I wouldn't care or even notice it until far later. And in the end, I couldn't help but feel disappointed. To be honest, what bothered me the most was Sonic. I've seen him portrayed like that so many times in the ship that it had down right become sickening. And when he actually resorted to using weaponary--I hadn't felt that pissed since I realized Shadow was using in a gun in Shadow the Hedgehog.

But it was kinda the Badass Tails story fault: (By the way, when I said I liked Tails in that story, I wasn't being sarcastic. That's the first time I've ever seen him portrayed that way and I loved it.) after reading it, I was expecting something 'out of the box' and interesting, hence while I was willing to give it try and it felt like I was reading more of the same. (Kinda like Sonic always some fluffed out submissive in a lot of Sonic/Shadow stories excpet for the one I honestly liked.)

As for Amy: I hate Mary Sues. And I hate when she's portrayed as one since she isn't--it's actually, why I love Amy so much. She can be kind, understanding and sweet, but determined, argumentative and headstrong. And a *little* obsessive and slightly creepy. ^_^*

::hugs you:: You are still a badass writer! You and Harley! I just didn't like that particular story for that particular reason.

Man, this story is getting kinda, ahem, nasty. Interesting, but nasty. Not to the point where I'd give it ridiculously low ratings like some people, ::looks around:: but pretty nasty. I think it's bs that you're getting such low ratings, and I tried to change that, but the score barely manages to increase. Gotta go, later!

yay ty ty ty for not killing knuckles and yes he did say "i love you too sonic" but mainly that's just a slip of toungue that happens in the heat of passion XD

steven:ok dude quit reading the man sex stories your creaping me the fuck out!

-DM vomits- EW! That's sick! If you keep making more gay sex, I'll give you bad ratings too. Let's get back to the part where Shadow gets evil and kills more of Sonic's friends. Kill Tails! Kill him! Then Sonic will rip Shadow apart, limb from limb. I give this chapter a 2 out of 5. I would've given it a 1 out of 5, but the reason I gave it a little better is because the story progressed. If it would've been sheer sex between Shadow and Knuckles, then I would've given it a 1. Or maybe even a zero.

Oh, and xain....... WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU! Are you gay or something? You're creeping me out too! Yaoi is not for guys.

Interesting as usaul. However, " Once the two Mobians had dried themselves off," I know Knuckles is a Mobian but how could Shadow be one? Anyway I really hope to see another update again soon. And Hurt tails! Yeah, hurt him bad!

Ok, I'm going to have to pitch in and review here too. As much as I love your writing, Harley, no writer can get me hot on gay sex. I'm a dude, and my junk only stirs up to thoughts of moist vagina. I have absolutely no problem with homosexuals. Hell, I even think they should be allowed to marry (I live in America, nobody wants them to marry here). After all, what they do in the bedroom is their business. But graphic depictions of homosexual intercourse tend to leave me with a feeling of dirtiness, much like a dentist who has their way with you when you're under the laughing gas. I'll just get to the point: Please, no more gay sex. PLEASE. Get back to Shadow brutally raping women (and men, if you must, but I'll just skim over those parts), It's what us normal people enjoy. *Irony fully intended*