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for Bloody Domination (Revised)

by Breech_Loader

person MaddiChan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm annoyed Amy got preggers. Are you seriously going to have Shadow repent then end up with Amy when this story is *seemingly* about well...his so called hatred for Sonic? Seriously?

Though this chapter was funny. I love Knuckles and the "HotY" line, that was just great. And I'm happy it finally got an update--I can't wait to see what happens next...I think. And what ever shall happen to
Tails? ::huggles::
person Mistress Bella
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. I'm not exactly sure what to make of the latest chapter. I'll reserve any and all comments about Amy getting pregnate until the next chapter, as this could go so many different ways, given Shadow's current state.
Though I did love this chapter. Sonic wanting to help Shadow, even after finding out what he's done is sweet of him. Knuckles is the same hot headed (reasonably so) lovable idiot that we know him to be. (You do him very well). Tails has mysteriously, stayed absent out of the story--where is the Sonic humping Kit--I mean...Miles anyway?
Though: is this going to become a Sonic/Shadow story? That could be interesting...if neither gets killed that is.

~Bella Malfoy
person anon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you dare finish this without involving Tails, well i may just have to find you and...
But seriously take your time and everything.
person GoGoGravityMan
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaay! shadow is startin to turn nice! repent! i like this story and its good to see some... well, goodness! what with all that brutal rape. UPDATE!
person Jello Biafra For President
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im Working on a MST of this soon.
person Maniacal Mercury
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about you all shut up and let them update when they feel like it. It's already gone 9 decent chapters in great time and there several other WIP's on the site still being worked on(obviously). It will be updated when they feel like updating, and I don't know about you but people bitching at me usually makes me not want to do it even more just to piss them off :p

Now as for Shadow going down the path of redemption I kinda like it however I think he's done a little too much to even hope for forgiveness now. Unless he's just acting that way for Tikal's sake showing he's not all that evil and demented and still plans to break Sonic in two then great. I shall be patiently awaiting your next chapter and pray to whatever diety like being if any that might be listening that you play nice with poor little Tails. :o
person BZKF
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what gives? Why haven't you two updated this in what, two weeks?
person Shooting Star
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but you can update that Rose Thorn BS, you can update this! This story is far more interesting!
person Microsoftt
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd really love to see Shadow attempt to redeem himself. With that deep psychological damage, even if he tries, he'll likely have some mental problems to an extent and even with that aside, after what he's already done, there will be some people who will hate him forever. I wonder, what will he do? It'd be great to see him try to be good again.
person MaddiChan
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S THE UPDATE! IT'S LIKE ALWAYS UP BY NOW! ::SOBS::