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My deepest apologies for not having reviewed already. (I've been busy enjoying Christmas gifts.) and I thought I already had. Anyway;Good to see Shadow arguing with himself about what he is doing. Didn't much enjoy Tails getting raped, but meh, he was a longtime coming(or however the saying goes.)

Maniacal Mercury said:

Tails is 8 years old! :o
Him getting fucked is not a good thing!
.........Unless he consents of course! ^.^

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No, even then it's not okay. Tails is 8 fucking years old. What are you, a fucking pedophile? Should I call the police before you become a card-carrying member of NAMBLA and tell people that it's okay to fuck 8-year-olds as long as they say it's okay? They're not fucking old enough, you sick bastard! Go get your jollies off with people your age, because I have no fucking respect for anybody who exploits children.

Welcome to the Internet, Voice of Reason. Congratulations on reading TEXT PORN and talking as if Tails being eight years old actually mattered. Threatening to call the police just because of Innurnets? You make me laugh. There's plenty of other arguments I could come up with, but the situation pretty much makes fun of itself.

That's the one thing I actually hate to see in fanfiction when it comes to Amy: most author's usually take her personality and go one way or the other in a extreme direction with her. She's either overly nice where she gives Cream a run for her money on the 'Mary Sue' title or she's overly annoying and obessive to the point where that most fans are just down right insulted. Sure she can *be* annoying. And obessive. And a little creepy. But overall, Amy Rose a sweet and good hearted person. She's a good balance of characteristics and it's honestly rare to find a fanfiction author that can dipict her well. I've honestly, see maybe two stories that way.

But now I digress. I'll look you up Froggy! And nice to see you working on this fiction now!

Now, let's get back to this piece of work...

1. Amy Pregnate
This issue to me is a two sided coin. I understand why a lot of reviewers don't like this turn of events but to be honest, taking my own person comments out of the situation, I think that's a terribe fate for Amy short of death. I mean look at the big picture here: Who the HELL wants to be pregnate by their rapist? Not to mention the girl is only twelve. TWELVE! What the hell does a twelve year old really know about raising children? I will admit, I thought it was a pure show of favoristim at first that Amy was allowed to live when everyone else seemed to be biting the dust but I rather like this turn of events to be honest...as lone as we don't dwell on it because there are other characters in the story with their own problems. Now here's my question: is Amy going to keep the baby at all? This entire ordeal has had a pyscological effect on her I'm sure and well...if she didn't, I dont' think to many people would down right fault her. Personally, unless the pregnate plays any kind of major role, it really wasn't needed though however, that type of things does happen and for the overall tramatic play of it, I think it was a good decision. So kudos.

2. Sonic
I just want to bring this up because I thought it was too hiliarous: okay, at the beginning of the chapter in question (Going Round in Circles) you said there will be 'Less Wanker Sonic'. And yet, in this chapter, he risk Amy's life with a damn race just to save her!? How the hell isn't that being less of a wanker? LMFAO! No no, I get the point of the part but I just found it rather...ironic. Though I will say, I am very interested to see how Sonic will handle things in the next chapter. Amy is one thing...but Tails? Will Sonic be so forgiving knowing that Tails has been hurt? I can't wait until Monday.

3. Revised Chapter and Knuckles
For the love of all things Sonic: THANK YOU. I can't believe how well you do Knuckles in this situation as a whole. His entire reaction to everything thus far is exactly as I thought it would have been! I'm not sure who is doing Knuckles now, Harley or Froggy, but whomever you are, as a serious Knuckle's fan, I love you right now!

4. Tails Big Scene
Is it wrong that I laughed through most of the chapter? Him being so naive was just...priceless. Yet strangely, in character. It actually made me feel worse for him, as he honestly didn't understand or know that Shadow was different and considered him a friend. And Shadow's progression of sanity actually made the chapter powerful. It's gotten me rather excited to see what will happen in the finale.

I'm completely done for now, as I want to wait to see what will happen in the end. I won't say 'sequal' because I always judge such thing by their endings. But so far, the story is interesting and good, so continue to write it. (And damn it people, get this shit off of 3 stars...)

Oh, and I just wanted to add:
The beginning of the chapter, where he was trying to find Amy? Again, powerful and moving. You couldn't help but feel sorry for Amy--and hold your breath and pray she could get out of there. Good lord, my heart was skipping beats!

Voice or Reason: where where you when Cream was getting raped in like, the first (or was it second?) damn chapter? Cause that little baby was like six. I'm not saying Tails and Cream getting raped is okay---actually, you can toss Amy in there because she's only twelve herself--but I think the writer is trying to show just how disgusting Shadow really is. And what's a worse type of monster than one that prays on children?

Maddichan: It is not the rape I object to, as that is an important plot device that is integral to the story. What I did object to was Maniacal Mercury's suggestion that it would be okay to have sex with an 8-year-old if it is consentual. I do not agree with this, as 8-year-olds are incapable of consenting (even when they are as intelligent as Tails is), because of their susceptibility to be open to many suggestions and the process known as grooming, whereby pedophiles trick young children into thinking that sexual conduct with them is "okay". That is what I object to.

I've always been fond of the Voice of Reason, and it speaks once again. There's nothing particularly funny or arousing about of any of this, and if someone finds the rape of children in it either...well, I think they've missed the entire point. It was certainly unpleasant to write this stuff, and it's my hope that it's just as unpleasant to read it.

Draconis! My favorite reviewer! Glad to hear from you again. To answer your unasked question, I was the one who played as Knuckles most recently, and I also was responsible for Tails (I've always wanted to try him) and Amy. Nothing against Terminus, but he really played Knuckles too soft in the previous version, and I felt like redeeming the tempermental, obsessive Rad Red and injecting him with a nice big dose of rage. Harley's going to handle him next. As for Tails, the thing I like about him is that for all of his intelligence, he's very naive and trusting, a tragic combination in this case.

Tails is 8 years old! :o
Him getting fucked is not a good thing!
.........Unless he consents of course! ^.^
You have to be gentle! :(
::continues cuddling poor Tails::
Anyways, still an awesome story despite this chapter XD
Can't wait to read more and I shall pray to whatever diety there may be if any that are listening Tails is rescued before Shadow murders him ;_;

I'm not sure if my last one got deleted but I can't wait for the next update. Please have Sonic forgive Shadow...and save him mentally if he can't do it physically. And don't kill Tails. If you didn't kill Amy (and made her...pregnate...yeeeah...) or Knuckles, then Tails can live too. Cause really...you made him too precious.