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oh please do update soon that was a very good chapter and i cant wait for me. please update soon. ^_^

RUN daniel RUN!

I knew it! I knew it was Andre!! Hmm... unless it's not really Andre and Walter's just playing a trick on Daniel...

Either way, this chapter is sooo luff! Melanie's addorable... though those bunnies of hers creep me out. XD

And any chapter with Walter in it is awesome. <3

I can't wait for your next chapter! You're officially my favorite SH fic writer now! <3

So, he's ready to accept Mother, then?

I seriously love this story. It's just so... fantastic. I actually felt like crying while reading this chapter. Poor Daniel. -sigh- He's not going to get a very happy ending.

Yes, my reviews give +12 writing skills.

This... is so... freakin'... AWESOME!! I only JUST got into the SH series, and your story actually inspired me to go play the games! Freakin' awesome! Update! Please! If you don't update I'll cry!!

And... Walter makes me tingly inside. <3

WOW! Just...wow! That chapter was certainly worth the wait. :)

I was very intrigued by the 'flashback' to Walter's parents. You really captured the helplessness Daniel was feeling, seeing all that and being able to nothing to help. I was also very surprised at how events actually transpired. I almost feel sorry for Walter now, knowing what really happened to his parents in this story, that he was robbed of his family by that thing; almost being the key word. He's still an evil bastard now, regardless of his tragic origins. Regardless, now we have a greater understanding of him, and of the "Mother" he worships so fervently.

I'm hoping Daniel will get up in Frank's face. He's just been through hell, he's found yet another pair of Room 302's victims, and it's only going to get worse from here. I can understand Frank's desire to just ignore the room's ominous nature and pretend like nothing out of the ordinary happens there. But the room is a huge threat to everyone in the building including himself. Ignoring it isn't going to make the evil there go away, and it's sure not going to help him whenever Walter or his "Mother" decide to take things to the next level. Maybe Frank just needs to see it for himself, but getting angry with Daniel isn't going to accomplish anything. And after everything he's been through, I think Daniel's entitled to chew out the old man a little.

After all, how understanding can you be when you've got an undead killer, his demonic rival, and their even more demonic "Mother" on your ass? ;)

Review for Chapter 8:

I re-read this chapter after posting on your livejournal. I still think that "Mother" is someone I wouldn't want to even meet in broad daylight.

I do like the song that Vivian was listening to. Creepily, pretty.

I can't wait to see how Daniel is going to react to Frank. I'd be thrilled to be out of that apartment.

Thank you for another wonderful chapter. Please, keep them coming!

Ahhh!

Madness abounds! Daniel just can't seem to get a break.

And that she-creature...*shudders* Not very nice, is she?

Lovely as always. You never disappoint. ^_^

oh...wow....MORE! GIVE US MORE! NOW!....plz?

Awesome!

God I love this. *fangirls at you*

I love the atmosphere, the tension and your use of language.
And I want to see Walter and Daniel together. I can't wait for it, actually.

Eagerly awaiting more, as always.