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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so close what happened to Frank, so cool, I am so eager to see what happens next and if Walter will come back and get his two boys? PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY! DON'T MAKE ME BEG!!!!!
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh my. How hot. I really love your writing, please keep updating. ^-^
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I said it once in the FF.net review and I will say it here, the masturbation part was really to my opinion symbolic of Walter's utter control over Daniel which is downright disturbing when the one thing that is usually a ounce of control and dominance by the own person himself is manipulated by a outside force instead. YIKES! But aside from the that this story is so gripping you have to write the end to this and I am still reeling from the phone calls that Daniel gets from that girl.
*whispers* Oh and please don't forget the SLASH love......WEEEEE!
*whispers* Oh and please don't forget the SLASH love......WEEEEE!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome just awesome! I can't wait until you get to Daniel and Henry! CANNOT WAIT! This story is awesome please don't stop writing it!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! UPDATE QUICKLY! I BEG OF JOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The writing is SO great!!! Im gonna die of happy-iness!!!!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
100th reviewer. whoo hoo.
great chapie(chapter).
great chapie(chapter).
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 : ((sorry, loooong review for me)
I like the initial fixation on the blood and how it was evocative of Daniel's memories regarding his parent's deaths. The association, I feel, is very real, especially because thoughts of his parents have been aroused lately. Frank and Daniel also seem unable to look away from Andre's decimated corpse, which adds a realism that many seem to skip over - how everyone is drawn to horrific sights despite themselves.
Walter was fantastic, especially the phrases you give him, eg "your golden ball of despair and delusions? I refuse to catch it". He sounds oddly wordly, priestly and insane, which makes him really jump off the page and mug me. I felt for Daniel as well, especially when he was berating himself for his mother's death. It was good to see him get some control, though, with the "door" that let Frank in and then kicked him out.
Curious as to who "they" are and, of course, whether Henry will be able to patch Daniel up okay (Hope so!) Briliant chapter! So very twisty (and twisted)!
I like the initial fixation on the blood and how it was evocative of Daniel's memories regarding his parent's deaths. The association, I feel, is very real, especially because thoughts of his parents have been aroused lately. Frank and Daniel also seem unable to look away from Andre's decimated corpse, which adds a realism that many seem to skip over - how everyone is drawn to horrific sights despite themselves.
Walter was fantastic, especially the phrases you give him, eg "your golden ball of despair and delusions? I refuse to catch it". He sounds oddly wordly, priestly and insane, which makes him really jump off the page and mug me. I felt for Daniel as well, especially when he was berating himself for his mother's death. It was good to see him get some control, though, with the "door" that let Frank in and then kicked him out.
Curious as to who "they" are and, of course, whether Henry will be able to patch Daniel up okay (Hope so!) Briliant chapter! So very twisty (and twisted)!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god!their coming.!
great chapter...love the sadismness of it.
great chapter...love the sadismness of it.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! finally! updates!! w00t!....they?
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O
Okay, next chapter now, please D:!
Okay, next chapter now, please D:!