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Beautiful, just as most of your work. Can't wait to read more. =)

Wheee! More fic for me to read over and over! :)

I really like this chapter, a lot. Wlater is such menacing, smooth character with a lot of darkness behind him. And even though I'm not normally as interested in female OC's (Yes, I am a slashaholic) I really liked 'Stutter Bunny'. She's super cute.

Keep it up! I'll be awaiting the next installment with eagerness.

Incredible, you truely are a talented writer, I'm really looking foreward to reading more of this. Please update soon I cant hardly wait to see what happens next =}

So good.

So far, Ch. 3 is my favorite. The creepiness has really begun... lovely. :) The way Daniel handles everything is very realistic. Well, considering that's how I can imagine someone reacting to what he sees/experiences. I really like the scene when Walter is standing in front of Daniel's door, and then what proceeds after that. Very, very creepy and I love the imagery you orchestrated into that bit. Good job. :)

Lucia... yeah, I want to slap her. But in a way I really pity her. Hmm.

I like Melanie. It's interesting that you are making her a strong-willed person, yet she doesn't really convey it. I like that... I like how Lucia is really the one that is not strong.

Good job with this chapter. I definitely can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the interaction between Walter and Daniel of course. ;)

Thanks for sharing another great chapter/piece of work! Until next time. *waves*

Mel

Review for 1 & 2: Although I don't know much of SH outside of the movie, the storyline is really intriguing. Walter really creeps me out. You did a wonderful job of introducing him in the 2nd chapter. He's definitely the kind of person you want to have a restraining order against. *laughs*

I like Daniel, though... he reminds me alot of me. He is also full of angst - you can't help but feel sorry for him in the beginning. What a mess to lose both of his parents?

No matter what you write, I always enjoy what your twisted mind comes up with. (That's a good thing. Haha!) I can't wait to read Ch. 3 and get into the good stuff. *evil grin*

Thanks for sharing! I hope you inspiration keeps a steady flow with this one. I can really tell you are enjoying it.

Review for Ch. 3:

Very nice and creepy. You're imagery is so defined and so yummily dark. I'm very glad you decided to not kill this plot bunny. Please, continue...

Oh yeah! Forgot to say in my LJ review:

That doll is creepy as hell. o_O; Ominous is an understatement! That thing just kinda popped into his laundry from outta nowhere. ._. I think Walter + the doll is cause for all the SHesque shit happening to Daniel. That or the two are connected, as was hinted(?) at in context. Er... Other'n that :D

Unless I forgot something. Again XD;

~the seph

Picking up where we left off at LJ, this is my reply review :D

Hehe, well... half an old couple XD;;

Ooo... Yes, it would :D

Awesome! Sounds very interesting... and I can't wait to see what ya did with poor Henry... Dun dunnn... DUN!!

Yeah, ya did--I never thought he was "hot" in the game, but with you you wrote him, he seems more attractive. Personality & behavior-wise--he was just fucked up in the game. I've a feelin' you'll make him fucked up in a way that's semi-different from the game. *shrug* Like... add yer own touch to him kinda thing? Meh, I dunno, I just know I'll like it when I see it, and I'm greatly anticipating what you're gonna have him do to Henry & Daniel <3

Love that boy, btw.

Oh, I know it'll be a while! I think ya said that somewhere in the warnings. At any rate, I'll be lookin' forward to Pyramid head when he comes :D *drool*

Hehe... Ttul! :3

~the seph

*lurve*

Love that boy, btw.

Oh, I know it'll be a while! I think ya said that somewhere in the warnings. At any rate, I'll be lookin' forward to Pyramid head when he comes :D *drool*

Hehe... Ttul! :3

~the seph

PS: My review got cut off earlier -_-