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Brilliant, as usual...Daniel is really growing on me. I loved Walter blowing kisses over his shoulder; for some reason I found this very sexy.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOO~

O.O;;;

That scared the living CRAP/DAYLIGHTS outta me! I HATE dolls in horror stuff!!!! O_O;;;; I'll have to review later. I feel uneasy. I'll review on your LJ. It makes me feel safer.

>_> <_< >_> *looks around the room, contemplating if how fast she can get to her bedroom from the computer room*

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~the seph

Oh!

Creey and dark.

That doll is really scary. *shivers*

So Daniel is ready to fight. Go Daniel!

Uh oh. I think Walter is planning something for the occupants of room 207. I find myself torn between wanting to adore Walter and his evil self, or wanting to loath him and run far, far away. *laughs*

I like how you tied in the history of Silent Hill. Pieces are beginning to fall together, even if, for me, they're coming together pretty slowly.

Great job and keep up the excellent work!

-Chaosdreamer

Ahhhh... So good and creepy. Let me just say that the game scares the crap out of me, and you do a great job of bringing that to this story. I really don't want to be Daniel right now.

The whole doll thing... Urgh!

Can't wait for more!

This was one creepy chapter. I never really cared for dolls... they were okay, but damn, I'll never be able to look at Ragedy Anne the same way anymore. O_O

I really enjoyed the interaction between Melanie and Daniel. I love the girl's boldness... yet her shy reactions each time. She's very endearing... and Daniel's reaction is as well. Would really love to see something between them... we'll see. *laughs*

Despite the fact that I hate Andre's guts, I would seriously do the same thing if I saw Daniel standing outside my door... no matter who it was I would've been pissed. But damn Walter for setting that up... the kiss over the shoulder was totally cool. ^_^

This was definitely an intense chapter... the history, that friggin' doll, Walter's games and Melanie's apartment. Loved it all. Thanks again for sharing with us another wonderful read... and so fast!!

I've never played any of the Silent Hill games, but I had to read this since you're the one writing it. You have this amazing talent of creating such vivid imagery, and I have no problem visualizing everything even though I've no knowledge of this fandom. Have you ever considered writing professionally? I really think you have the talent for it.

Wow... That's really all I can say at the moment. Wow.

So creepily good. I'm so glad that I keep checking to see if you've updated. Now I can't wait for the next chapter.

For Chp. 4:

WOOOOOO! First off... I love Frank even more! He's a very interesting character, and love how you portray him! I kinda felt sorry, but also irritated that Daniel put his foot in his mouth. Poor Frank... Rather interested about Henry now, though. Hehehe...

Andre. Can I kick him? In the balls? :D That would just make my day! And I love the way Frank made everything stop by just being there! Hehe! :3

... Little Walter's appearing now O_O Damn, it must be hard on Daniel--people think he's hallucinating due to drugs. x.x;; Gladys is... both endearing and annoying ^^; She seems rather interesting, like... why is she such a recluse? But annoying 'cause she *does* sound rude from time to time. >_<

Awwwww how cute!!! *squishes Daniel* I just wanted to squish him! :3! When he was bashful about Frank buying his paintings, how I imagined it it, it was so cute!! *cringes slightly* I dunno... How I saw it just made Daniel scream uke to me. XD;; I dunno why I always do that.

I love the description of his art as well--it seems to be based off of that one "winter fairy" you drew. (I thought that was a lovely piece though :3 I wish I could draw like you X3)

Wow... Love the creepiness in your description of what happens after Daniel wakes up. *cringe cringe cry hide* Ahhhh! The sounds!! I can just imagine O.O;; I would HATE to be Daniel right now! That poor boy!!! *squishes him to try to get him feeling better*

I LOVE this line! Imagining was different than experiencing--however--and all Daniel wanted now was for this “memory” to end. Remember how I said that I feel both intrigued & horrified that Daniel's a horror junkie, 'cause he just found himself in someting worse? That quote is something along the lines of what I was referring to. Good job! :D

Very interesting take on Walter's parents!! I can't wait to see what you do with that! And... Henry too. o_O; Whoa... Wasn't expecting that ._.;;; Now I'm happily confused!

"Oh yeah... fear me and my plunger..." XD Awesome line!

... Ohh, poor Daniel. I know how it is to loose a parent, so I can definately relate to having found something that they left behind and just crying about it. I wanna hug him. *hugs him*

T___T

Now I'm both disturbed, freaked, and distraught. Nice going! *glomps* Can't wait to see another chapter :3 Take yer time if needed, mew.

~the seph

Oh my God! How heart wrenching (the last bit of the chapter)! It was wonderful, though. A little more depth and angst from Daniel. I like that a lot. Poor, poor guy... you just get this urge to hug him and then slap him silly to convince him to MOVE OUT of that apartment. Jesus, he is crazy to stay there. O_O

The plunger part was hilarious!! Definitely did not expect that! ^_^

Great chapter, lovie. The tension, the anger... so many emotions running rampant. So delicious! Thanks for sharing!

Ahhhh!!!

It's getting TOO good!

I'm getting excited. Daniel seems to be getting closer and closer. And Henry was mentioned.

I can't wait. Keep up the fantastic work.

-dreamerchaos