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will you please continue this story. Please i realize your busy *pout* but i really like this story. I mean i love characters and the setting is really detail....i mean its almost seems like a crime to drop such a wonderful story.....if you didn't drop it is there somewhere i can read the rest?

Yay, Henry appears again! :D I do hope this is going to be Daniel/Henry evetually.
I usually dislike new characters when reading fanfiction, but you took your time introducing Daniel and now I keep agonizing with him :) Plus you've really thought through this whole story and it shows, especially during scary parts :D
I've never been scared of my bathroom before, more like the kitchen since the fridge's humming is pretty loud and creepy ;P but now, heh..
Aaanyway, keep writing this story, I CAN'T wait for the next part, since there's going to be more Henry!

Oh...my...God...please write more of this. This is just, amazing! There are not enough words to describe just how amazing this fanfiction is. I want to read more! I love all the characters, the development, the general ambiance of this is just amazing! You really have a way with words and I started reading this when I saw the link on the SH Slash community on Livejournal. Keep it up! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

ahha. this chapter6 sort of answered some of my questions.
henry is dead.
but walter failed 'mother'. how so? it has something to do with henry and eileen right?
and so he wasnt able to do the 21 ritual thing.
if it had, the real world would look like hell or something? 'mothers paradise'
so, frank 'found' walter when he was born. like baby born? was walter born in 302, is that why hes obsessed with the sah and that room? were his parents killed there?

im not a gamer. so i looked up some background to sh4.
since henry is dead, i take it he is walters 21st victim?
has the 21 Sacraments ritual taken place? if so what does that mean?
the ritual is for 'purify' his 'mother'. er, what does that mean?

and, this was sort of drilled into my head in school, so i always pick up on it in stories.
use 'an' instead of 'a' infront of a word that beginns with a vowel.
an opperation. instead of, a opperation.
picky, i know. but its just something i always pick up on, i noticed it in the old rsemif too...

so, great story by the way. saw a pretty good screen shot of walter on deviantart by the way. hes pretty babe-ish, got that whole kurt colbain thing going on.
im not up on my fiction lingo, dont know what au is, or cannon, or mary sue for the matter. so does oc mean original character? and is daniel that oc, cause he wasnt mentioned in any sh info i could find. oh, and i take it the tenats are oc too? although, they remind me of the characters info i read who were in sh4. like bunny girl reminds me of eileen, and daniel reminds me of henry, cause he was all artistic and an observer.
so, are you keeping the m.m to walter and daniel? hot.
oh, are you going to kill daniel off?
guess you wont be saying, but hopen for an update soon.
bye maia

hey maiafay! hoping for an update soon.

Amazing. Awesome. Awe inspiring. Original. Creative. Thrilling. Terrifying.

WOW!!!

This is the most amazing piece of Silent Hill fiction I have ever read! It's truly a work of genius. I mean it! I am so wrapped up in this story I can't see straight anymore! I LOVE Daniel, I LOVE Mel, I LOVE the neighbors!! They are wonderfully fleshed out without them being annoying...and I ADORE your Frank! This is what a sequel to the Room would be. The twists, the turns, the classic Silent Hill fucker-up-ery with the mind games. It's beautiful. The melding of the games and stories is flawless. I love how you've taken bits and pieces from all four and seamlessly quilted them into Daniel's saga. I also love how you've been able to sneak in those little lemony bits without it screaming "BLATANT SEXUAL PLUG FOR THE SAKE OF HAVING SEX!!!!!". And Walter. Oh, Walter. I've always hated that greasy bastard...but now, I kinda like him...in the same way I care for my beloved Pyramid Head...he's sexy evil!!:3 Meh heh heh!! I've never really cared for Henry, he always seemed a bit too whiny, but here he wins the "Awesomest Hero EVAR!!" prize. Anyone that can stay ahead of Walter that long and stay sane has to be pretty awesome!

I really hope you continue this soon! I REALLY REALLY want to read the conclusion. Does Walter ever find out the truth about his parents? Is Melanie's cousin involved somehow? Where did Frank go? Is Alessa REALLY Daniel's sister? Where'd Valtiel go since Dan's back up for grabs? Does Daniel escape?

Please. Please, for the love of all that is just and good and pointy, PLEASE continue this magnificent tale!!

I have only read the first chapter so far, but already I absolutely LOVE it. You're a great writer (something that is hard to find on this site sometimes), and I think you've already hit the 'mood' of Silent Hill perfectly. I can't wait to read more, and I'll review again when I'm finished to let you know what I think ^_^

Oh, and thanks so much for your kind review on my own Silent Hill story! :)

Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! This is so not a fair place to stop! You quite literally have held me captive through this entire story so far; I've been stuck on the edge of my seat and dammit I want more! This has just been a truly AWESOME story so far, and I'll be holding my breath till the next chapter (so please...don't wait too long and kill me ^_~) hehe...anyway, LOVED it, and I look forward to more. :)

Re-reading my favourite fics today, as I'm injured, and in need of solace.

God, but I love this chapter. Walter is achingly hot when he's hurting Daniel. It's wonderful.

Looking foreward to the next installment, as always.