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for Why 'Devil May Cry'?

by Enima

person [-Neo-]
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm.. hello to everyone
this story make me laugh to da end..
never wondering this will happen to the character..
this is good story.. make me hot even im not gay.. but still..
fuhhh..
anyway.. worth to read for..
ganbatte sea_enigma
person Marcy Jade
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was sweet.
person jane
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good attempt, and it had the reedemable factor of Vergil being uke... but it was too sketchy. And too OOC. Try to put more thought and planning in your fics next time, please? You have good ideas, but writing them down could be better. Keep writing though, I am sure they'd get much better!