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for Dirty but Clean

by DarkCamala

schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty saucy ^.~ it's too bad though that you didn't include a spicy sex scene between Ada+Wesker; a couple I support :)

schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so freaking hott. Wesker is by far the hottest Resident Evil Guy
person weskers bitch
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wish there was more of this pair in the genre. Its by far the most interesting pair, and not very popular since most writers like the good girl and good boy pairing. Sometimes fans love the bad boy and good girl pairing too and is popular. How the good girl tames the bad boy. this is the bad boy and bad girl almost good girl scene that is very unusual. I can't make out what Leon Ada pairing is all about? Good boy and bad girl and bad girl gone good because of good boy?
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree that there needs to be more. MORE! YARR!
person niiice
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool solo fic! I liked how you captured both sides of the action. Wesker and Ada are a pretty interesting couple. I wish there was more about them!
person william birkin
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is there another chapter to this? the only part I didnt like was the anal cleaning part. Thats just weird for me as in my neighborhood, the rich people go to these places to get their asshole cleaned up so they can do anal fucking. I suppose they have this hose shoved up their ass and then suck out all the disgusting shit.
person James
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're all about the Ada/Wesker thing, aren't you? Its not bad. I actually like it. I wish there was a bit more in the genre. Are you doing a second part to this one? Wesker seems to really want to, and I'm sure Ada wouldn't mind at all!

ps. It is a bit painful when you have to cut off before ejaculation, but boy is it ever fun when you finally get to!

~James
person Streti
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mm, that's a sexy story! It can be hard to make masturbation scenes sexy and interesting, even when it's mutual, but you've managed in that with this setting. One gripe though: I can't believe any man would hold off from coming in a situation like that, even a tough guy like Wesker. For men, it can be even painful to hold off from ejaculation after such heavy stimulation.
person The Tyrant Hamster
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, hehe, that was seriously indulgant, I mean all fanfiction, adult or otherwise, is a fantasy, but this one read just like a fantasy, it was the character's fantasies, the double-effect of that was really potent. The writing was great, not totally base or vulgar, but it oozed and dripped with that forceful, blunt langauge of sex, cock, drip, thick, suck, all these words with a wonderful punch to them, made it really tangible. In most cases this would seem over the top, but, well, with these two, their physical endurance covers it easily enough. Really great smut here, the whole fantasy within a fantasy thing magnified the effect and it was, well, awesome, great how they kept in character too, gave it a nice feel of integrity and made it more believable.

PS: Hehe, the tyrant XD.
person Veronica
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(blushes)

SO detailed and surprisingly yummy for the NASTY-minded & peeping-tom Wesker.(isn't that what he LOVES to do best? Rofl!) But Rawr! baby!
I *so* would like to see another part to this.