rate_review Reviews

I'm actually putting a Krauser/Ashley scene into RE4 Uncut. I hadn't seen the pairing on here yet, so I thought I was going to be the first (heh, yeah right, with the rate I'm going I may never get there). Looks like you beat me to it, grrr.

As for the story itself... I thought you did a decent job depicting the emotions of Ashley roughly. You weren't intending it to be a deep, character driven story from what I gather, but in general, it was solid in that regard.

However, your story just *ends*. It cuts off in the middle of the scene, and I have to admit, if you'd kept it going and continued writing another half, or at least some more sequences and paragraphs, it would've been much better in my book.

Overall, nice pairing, decent portrayal, but too short and over too soon. Could've done to have more vivid descriptions and more drawn out actions, too.

-jm

Oh yeah....You know K/A is zeh hawt. There needs to be more smut with them. Your writing is totally erotic, gritty and arousing.

thats the word I wanted to use for your writing. Gritty. Down right gritty and effective.

*whew*

Excuse me...I have to run to the bathroom...

;)

wow.

Hehe, very nice. Not read a semi-rape story in a long time. Who says that stories need plots to be enjoyable? :P

Very hot. ^_^

Loved this story right from the very first sentence - you went straight to the action! Very hot!

loved it as always