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that was an incredible read, although honestly too short and abrupt, but still an incredible read.
I agree with all the reviewers above. Great job

This is very awesome, especially the way you executed this pair. I take it you're the first to write it? It's well done.
Rawwwr!

Detailed, fast paced, and totally hot. You cut off so suddenly though. It left me wanting more.

this is awesome. You write so good and flowing but like the others this needs closure!
You will continue yes?

Thought I'd go ahead and read your fics as well. I adored how you drove straight into the action and dropped all pleasantries. I was entertained right to the very (sudden) end.

Don't get me wrong. The ending is actually perfect. Not only is it a set up for future chapters, but it left me with a feeling that I have to have more.

~James

VERONICA!!!! update this baby will you? It's SO damn HAWT!

I have read more than a few of this authors works. Their stories are well written and you can tell thought was put into what was wrote about. I also have the benefit of being friends with the author and being able to read and review their work is a pleasure. The stories are a bit outside of my normal reading but I have never read one of their stories that I have not liked.

sorry I sound like a weird reviewer huh?

First of all, the name is about as fitting as you can get, hehe XD. As for the story itself, it was your usual, lust-infused quality work, I think Ashley just got a large dose of every girl who ever had a rape or submission fantasy's deeper desires, and a fair few guys too. You made it really quite believable, the way he was stimulating her body and getting her excited even if it was rape, which isn't easy to write without seeming false or too brutal, but you did it well here 8). It was very hot in a extreme, rough way, which was the aim no doubt, so, in that respect, well done, ace story ^^!

Veronica!! How come he didn't spill his load into her? You know he was going to, why'd you cut it short there? Seal the deal! Otherwise, that was hot hot hot!