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^-^ you're so full of perfection when it comes to your fics, aren't you?
i like that.

More! More,dood!

Good story. I liked your earlier fic so this 'continuation' was welcome. It's good to see more Laharl/Etna fans too.

Hope you'll continue these stories. ;)

Yeah....another one of your fanfic. I've been waiting for so long. I really like the story and your fanfic is definately the best out there.
It's was a bit short though. Compare to the other one about etna which by far is my favorites.

Keep updating if you can

Actually, I agree that this was a great solo fic and, as surprising as that sound, not repetitive in the least. Not only that, but that wasn't what I was expecting at all, and I like being surprised like that, furthermore you captured Flonne's mix of innocence and mischief quite well. Really, I loved it and can only hope for more. Though, personally, I'd go more for a Etna x Flonne scene for the next part. After all, no one said the Queen was one to be loyal to her 'husband'. Heck, I'm sure she'd manage to manipulate this whole thing to her advantage somehow. Either way, keep up with that kind of quality work and hopefully cook us up a nice next part.

love it please go on. i hope there is a threeson with the three main people of disgaea 1

I’m curious what sections of this fic you feel the need to rewrite so badly. Favorite parts? The tail play and the mages going quiet as a succubus walks by.

It’s easy for masturbation scenes to read a little repetitious, but that’s not the case here. Another solid read.

No real weak parts, but I’m glad it doesn’t last longer than it does. Nothing against long chapters, it’s just something about this piece—I think my attention would begin to wander after too long.