rate_review Reviews

That was the most amusing fanfic I have read in a long time. Riku's lines were just...priceless. I never knew that Riku was such a poet-- really, I cracked up during this whole story. Good job. The smut was well written, but the dialouge was just off.

If this was ever a manga or an anime, or some pictoral represenatation of this fic, I would buy a trillion copies of each and watch (or read) them over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again, til either my eyes bleed from the strain of watching (or reading) them so long, or I die for lack of food and sleep because I've been watching (or reading) the manga (or anime).
But it's okay! At least I'll die happy! Yay! :)
I love your fic so much!

Goddamn it.. that was beautiful...

At this point I am rendered speechless.. Thats how I know when a fic is really good.. when a mindless blabberer like me is actually at a loss for words. I could blame it on the late hor all I like.. but it's really cause I'm sitting in awe still reliving the favored moments of the story..

How sweet how very very swee this was... a true pleasure to read....

I'll probably leave another review thats less disjointed...

Hopefully it won't be after I rereading of the story.. Else I'll be mushbrained again..

Neko's Rate 5 Stars! (Can you say... Awesome?)

Rating... just do it ...

Mmkay. Good story, but...you should take out the Japanese. It's used incredibly incorrectly.

And I can't imagine Riku ever calling Sora his angel.

But otherwise, great fic, great smut.

i do like this story. it's well-written.
the only thing i frown on is the usage of japanese words in an otherwise fully english text, but that's a pet peeve of mine to start with. :)
you did a great job with this. keep it up.