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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great job with this story. I love all the detail. you have a talent.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww <3 yay i wuv it. sequl plx :D
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice! It's quite sweet, actually. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm almost too shocked for words. I don't regulary read the Riku/Sora pairings because there are way too many and most are horrible, but I'm glad I stumbled upon this one. I love the fact that you made Sora's first reaction realistic instead of him just accepting Riku like most writers do.
Also, I can't help but notice the wonderful writing skill you have. You were only 16 when you wrote this?! When I was 16, I wouldn't have even dreamed of being able to write like that. Hell, I can't even write that well now.
Anyway, I'm not sure about anoter chapter. Although I love your writing and plot, the story goes very well with that ending. If you could find a way to tie in another chapter, without dragging the story, that would be great! Either way, I respect you immensely for your unquestionable talent.
Also, I can't help but notice the wonderful writing skill you have. You were only 16 when you wrote this?! When I was 16, I wouldn't have even dreamed of being able to write like that. Hell, I can't even write that well now.
Anyway, I'm not sure about anoter chapter. Although I love your writing and plot, the story goes very well with that ending. If you could find a way to tie in another chapter, without dragging the story, that would be great! Either way, I respect you immensely for your unquestionable talent.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just wow.... I don't think I have ever read anything that good in my entire life. Your style and detail is breathtaking! You are an amazing writer and I so hope you make another story in Sora's POV.
I am in complete awe. <333
~Steph
I am in complete awe. <333
~Steph
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was... excellent... beautiful... so, SO romantic. The amount of detail and emotion put into this is astounding- it would be a waste of your excellent writing skills to not continue this fic. I implore you to write another chapter!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. ;___; <3333 One of the best fanfics I've read. EVER.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!! Its so sweet! And cute! And sad (for a while)!
And best of all, it was HOTT!!!!!! ^^lol
I really lilked it! It was the perfect balance of plot [sort of, lol] and smex! *purrs* And the smex was great! lol I really love Riku/Sora pairings, and this one is so adorable, its almost too much for my heart!
In my opinion, you nailed the characters perfectly, though I haven't played Kingdom Hearts in such a long time, now... lol If only they had made it Riku/Spra in the game! Don't they hint at it so much it makes its yaoi fans go crazy tho? lol
And best of all, it was HOTT!!!!!! ^^lol
I really lilked it! It was the perfect balance of plot [sort of, lol] and smex! *purrs* And the smex was great! lol I really love Riku/Sora pairings, and this one is so adorable, its almost too much for my heart!
In my opinion, you nailed the characters perfectly, though I haven't played Kingdom Hearts in such a long time, now... lol If only they had made it Riku/Spra in the game! Don't they hint at it so much it makes its yaoi fans go crazy tho? lol
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol I meant Sora, in the last review!
lol Anyways, had to review again!!!! The game made my yaoi-mind ring so bad! Even if it was just me going "THEY"RE MEANT TO BE!!" or "SCREW SORA, RIKU! HURRY BEFORE KIARI GETS IT IN //HER// HEAD TO!!" lol
I cant say enough times how this just grabs my heart and runs wildly away with it... lol Tho, to be truthful, I ain't chasing after it to get my heart back... lol And Sora was such a cute darling, I wanna hug 'em to death... lol But Riku would kill me, no? ^^lol Then he'd hug him and go off to make wild love to him! ^^ *drools* [daydream about the two starts to play in her mind] ^^ Well, enough of my rambling! Great story, again! (or did I not say it the last time? hmmm.... lol)
lol Anyways, had to review again!!!! The game made my yaoi-mind ring so bad! Even if it was just me going "THEY"RE MEANT TO BE!!" or "SCREW SORA, RIKU! HURRY BEFORE KIARI GETS IT IN //HER// HEAD TO!!" lol
I cant say enough times how this just grabs my heart and runs wildly away with it... lol Tho, to be truthful, I ain't chasing after it to get my heart back... lol And Sora was such a cute darling, I wanna hug 'em to death... lol But Riku would kill me, no? ^^lol Then he'd hug him and go off to make wild love to him! ^^ *drools* [daydream about the two starts to play in her mind] ^^ Well, enough of my rambling! Great story, again! (or did I not say it the last time? hmmm.... lol)
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't....I can't...words cannot devise how wonderful this story was. They just can't. I've read smut. I've read straight smut. I've read plotline smut. I've read yaoi smut. I've read Kairi-bashers. I know all the problems that plague fanfic artist. This story had none. Japanese was used eloquently, instead of being randomly shove in. Aside from one at the beginning of the smut, paragraphs were perfectly spaced. Sexual tension= PERFECT! I give! I surrender! I have found the messiah! *jumps on table* DO you HEAR, fangirls?! It is the sound of a WRITER!! *rabid fangirls scatter* Well, you have my major kudos. I do hope you have the grace to take a look at some of my writing over at FFN under my review name here. I just...wow........
Score: 405/10
Score: 405/10