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for The Debt

by koea

person M.R.B.
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.K.

I'll just say this is an nice chapter.


Update!
person M.R.B.
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a guy like me, I say this chapter is pretty cute but at the same time, it's kinda sad also. Good work.

WHOA! Ciera can carry her heavy unconscious pet onto her shoulder! O.O That means she's very strong, right?

I think you made one(or two) error: You put "Strangle Thorn Vale" instead "Stranglethorn Vale", but this is just minor mistake, so there's nothing to be serious about.

I will wait for your next update.
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapters. Kane and Alex are too funny together. :D Can't wait for more.
person M.R.B.
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice story, but I don't think the Horde would raid Theramore. Isn't it neutral place?
person Koea
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No actually it's contested I was ganked there when I was playing my char >.<
person tank
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute stuff just some minor spelling mistakes but the story itself more than makes up for it^^
person Ash and Sorrow
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! More stories about MALE night elves. I anticipate reading more. Good work.
person tank
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah this is certainly gonna get interesting please continue!
person M.R.B.
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start.
Update.
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more. :D Hurry please. HAHA!