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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so that's what smexy means. Okay then.
Nice chapter, like I said before, It's cute and funny. Man, I was pretty disappointed when you finished the chapter when things are getting very interesting, but I'll forgive you when you update the next chapter.
And to be honest, Kane can be dumb and funny at sometime, but he's a real gentleman to Alex.
Nice chapter, like I said before, It's cute and funny. Man, I was pretty disappointed when you finished the chapter when things are getting very interesting, but I'll forgive you when you update the next chapter.
And to be honest, Kane can be dumb and funny at sometime, but he's a real gentleman to Alex.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the last sentence in my last review, did it sound so damn corny? Man, I feel so embarrassed.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAY! New chapters! Huzzah! Excelent backstories now, and still marvelous! Keep it up!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome....... Is Alex ever going to find out about their involvment that fateful day? I mean these last couple of chapters were, just awesome. More please. This story is great!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was fast. Good work.
Ah, this maybe a stupid question, but what does "smexy" means? I never heard that word before. It's perhaps something to do with "sexy", but I'm not truely for sure it is.
Anyway, update.
Ah, this maybe a stupid question, but what does "smexy" means? I never heard that word before. It's perhaps something to do with "sexy", but I'm not truely for sure it is.
Anyway, update.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated.
Man, it sucks to be sick with a flu, right?
Update soon.
Man, it sucks to be sick with a flu, right?
Update soon.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, very well done. The only thing I do not like is that you, like so many others, portray the horde as the evil barbaric race. They are more peace loving then the humans, it just bothers me when they are said to be evil.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah shit! I feel bad for Kane but it was so damn hilarious what the girls and murlocs did to him. And I'm glad you skipped the scene where Kane is being rape by so many murlocs, otherwise I will puke.
Update.
Update.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VEry good so far keep up the good work
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 was awesome. It made me cry! :) But it was too short, *stomps foot* I want to keep reading. :D Update very, very soon please. :D