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for The Debt

by koea

schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed the story...the dialogue became a lil childish sometimes...but a gud story it was.
person vivarose
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww so cute and heart breaking! I loved it! You actually had me crying there for a bit. Well done!
person Crystal
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you! >.< No but seriously, this is the most romantic story ive ever read, except for The Darkness story that
I read up here a few years ago. Plus I cried like a baby at the end and mostly threw all the story.
Usually that doesnt happen...But yes! *throws a fist into the air* Thank you for a well written
Creative story.
person DTH
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story- i really liked it!
person toasted.neko
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! <3 World of warcraft is a feeling, wink wink! This was an interesting story, and I'd love to see more about Kane and co. ;) *nudge* :D
person toasted.neko
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, my review somehow got cut off... but the basic parts of it was "Write more because I LOVE these characters!" They were so much to read about. KanexAlex would be awesome to read. :3
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do Nightelves actually say "Hell"? They worship a goddess (Elune), I wouldn't think they'd use a human term.
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I'm going to miss these guys... Are you doing any sequils? Or at least new stories? I hope so. I loved your story! :D
person Joey_456
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate you so much for having to end it, but it was one of my all time favorites on this site. I hope that you right some more as you are very talented. Make sure to add more stories to the site and good luck with your writting :)