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Ah, I've been looking all over for a yuri Summon Night story. It's been nearly 3 years since you've updated, though...

Please please please update this story, it's so well written and have such a good plot that it shouldn't be abbandoned like this. =\

I do not reads tons of fanfics, but Ihave to say this is probably the best Yuri I've ever read. And not only that, but this based off one of my favorite GBA games.
When I first got it, I played it to death. And because of that, I can easily say that all of the characters in this fic are very in character. Any of the things that they have do in it, feels like things they would actually do.

Whoa, first time I found a summon night fic this good ^^ I really like it! Razzy looks a little ooc, but anyway xD Continue it! please >.<

I've actually been following your writing for a while and have read all your work, I've only just now created an account. But what I wanted to say is how beautifully intimate all of your stories are. I especially love the way you are able to find all sorts of new spins to keep things fresh and original.

This story has become a favourite over the one you did about Baten Kaitos. I recently got this game and playing through I loved the characters, I am actually writing a similar fic at the moment and was delighted to see you writing about my favourite pairing in the game!

Seeing as you asked for a review I decided I'd give you one. I think you've actually captured the characters beautifully in this. They all seem to follow a logical progression from where they were at in the game. Aside from the obviously more mature perspective, it wouldn't actually seem out of place if this had happened in the game, which is another thing I tend to like in your work.

Personally I would love to see some more of this one!

Nice rendition of Razzy! Also....what did you mean by when she saw the light of Shintetsu, she saw Sanary's instead?

This story isn't at all what I expected - it's very.. subtle, and that's a good thing. Not having it be explicit yuri or having Pratty jump into a sexual encounter with Sugar right away makes it more effective. It'd even work just fine as a one-shot, but by the title of "Part 1" I assume you have more in mind - which I don't mind either.

I think having Pratty slowly realizing Sugar's real importance to her was very in-character and seemed really natural. Looking forward to more from this story!

Another great chapter. I like how you captured Pratty's feelings, and how Sanary has feelings for her, too. Sugar just wants her master to be happy in the end, even if it isn't with her. She had been upset when Pratty's father fell in love with someone else, but I think she was still happy for him.

And don't worry about my earlier suggestion. I was just excited finding a Summon Night story to begin with, and had all these other ideas floating around in my head. I know you mostly write yuri, and so I'm not going to stop you from doing so.

Hope to see more to this story soon!

Yes! Finally, a Summon Night Swordcraft Story fic! I really enjoyed it; it does seem like in Pratty's game that she doesn't like girls in that way, but it's still sweet (and funny) how Sugar doesn't care what gender she is.

All in all, great fic. I hope you write more in the future, if not of Summon Night. I'd love to read a Cleru/Sugar story at some point, as well (she cons him into marrying her, ha ha).

Wow....That was beautiful. SImply beautiful. I loved it. Keep writing more Summon Night Fanfics dude!