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for Neon Lights

by Sapidity

person Meifu
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really good ^^ I loved the way you had Leon not kiss or comfort Cloud... it's so like him ^^ awesome work!
person Lumiere
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot, sweet, and with very good detail. However, the only irk with me, is that Cloud is rather out of character. Adorable as he may look, he's as stoic as Leon and doesn't appear to give a damn about much. Not to mention he's a bucket of angst. XD

Despite that, I still enjoyed this! ^_^