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for Thanks For Stayin'

by Sapidity

schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very interesting. I absolutely adore those boys getting it on. I have to say that I'm surprised that no one else has left a review, and it makes me sad. It wasn't bad, just a tad short, but writing gets better and longer with practice.

All in all, I think your style is just a little rough around the edges (most are on this site, mine included), and with time will improve a lot. ^_^
Cute but Psycho.