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by saesama

person Dragon Kirby
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"You forget that we were the ones who helped write those rules... And even if there was something about 'fraternizing in public', I hereby exercise my right as Second-in-Command and declare that rule null and void."
"Great. Now the Dusks'll be mating in the hallways."
"We'll sic Saïx on 'em."

Funniest part as well as Xaldin's teasing at the end. I loved it all.
*gives you the internet*
person yusuke-love
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....another great stories!! XD
you know there hardly any of Xigbar and Xaldin stories..
but this was the best!!
I like it!!...
hope you write more....good job!!
person BT
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waah, wonderful! Absolutely exquisite. <333
person Tokyo Kitty
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg that was great. I love Xigbar he rocks my socks. You did a great job with this I really liked the rubberband flinging at Demyx (btw I love Demyx too). There isn't enough fanfiction or images of Xaldin and Xigbar and there really should be. Good job!
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was loveeellyyyy. :D wonderful characterizations, nice downplayed-ish bouts of humor, great dialogue, and HAWT nobody sex. mmmmmm. i love those two. and of course, demyx walking in on them... lmfao. figures.

XD awesome job on this!
person Wired
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute, well as cute as it can be when it's Xaldin and Xigbar yelling at each other. I liked it.. that couple is slowly growing on me x3