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Well this is pretty good story although I thinkt he amulet thing is a bit much. For one thing semen dosen't just add up it degrates after a few days. I also think having it burned into her flesh is a bit overboard yeah it shocked her but something like that would be painful to have all the time and it wouldn't make any sense for her to go on before getting it removed from her body.

I'm hoping you go back and cut that part out at least it's a bit too much. Also I thought Lara already got rid of all that sperm in her body ealier in that flash back? it wasn't very clear what exactly happened at that point and I think you should make it more clear what she did becaues I thought she had removed it.

I was kind of hoping for Lara and her friend getting raped in that one scene and maybe a little forced F/F to add a little something that you haven't done yet. Maybe you can have that happen with that girl that is behind everything. How about that energy monster thing have some tentacle sex with Lara at one point? Will this thing that Ruthland have knock Lara up? Kind of a fast pregnancy that she goes through 9 months in like 9 minutes/hours? (that or that monster thing too)

I like your theme. I have to say I never really gave it much thought, but this is great. I love the spike, nice touch...I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your chapters.

Very well done and nicely thought out though it would be exciting to see more of the furry friends abuse her and I look forward to reading the later chapters.

Personally, i think this is an excellent piece of fanfiction as it is and doesn't need any format changes.
The traps and level elements have some interesting possibilities though.

well, long time no see, i check your stories daily but i have been without oyou for over 3 months, id like to see some more beastiality, plase, like lions and stuff, and id also like to see more violense to lara, she is so hot she just needs to be abused. so yea. thats all i got to say, maybe a gang bang in the begninng and then a 1 on 1 in the end

Well you did have a gangbang then 1on1 at the end of chapter 3. so you could have say 1on1 then a gangbang...which is sorta the samething

I guess your could post both then branch off from one of them based on responses

Well, the gangbanging has kinda been overused. I'd say uno-uno would be a hell of an idea to go on now. And yeah, make him realize Lara's gettin' gangraped on every mission, it'd make for an interesting moment or ten in the story.

And whatever you do, please don't do any snuff or lactation things or scat or anything like that. o.O You've done hella good so far, DON'T RUIN IT! *laughs*

Daaaamn, man. Third chapter kicked ass. I'm a believer in awesomeness of it now. XD 5/5.

AWESOME STORY, amazed I hadn't seen it yet. Great work, this is one of the best Tomb Raider stories yet.

WOW.

The story with the serum was sooo gooood.

Please more!!!