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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting story. I loved what little lemon it had in it. Even so, I think I liked the alt. ending the best. That's just my opinion though. I hope to read any future works you have to offer. Please keep on writting. You have earned my seal of oproval.
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its great that you finally finished up your zelda fic.....
but i really wanna see ch.7 for Anger's Sin!
but i really wanna see ch.7 for Anger's Sin!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok this is a great story but i think u missed a few details in the story. 1st when the tri force is put together and made 1 again it can grant 1 wish to the person in posession. 2nd y didnt link just show zelda and the whole kingdom the adoption papers and last but not least how the hell could u kill link and his son cmon man thats not right
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I only have time to read the first chapter atm, but something about your simplistic writing style just catches me, i hope the rest of the chapters are same quality.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story thus far. Frankly, I can understand why Link Jr. would be pissed. Told all his life that he was the son of Link, only to find out that he ISN'T, and that Hylian law says that he would have had to be killed if he had stayed with his mother and father (stupid laws, made by stupid 'gods'). Got a good reason to be pissed off.
Now that he has the power of all the Triforce, I don't think that ANYONE, the sages and Princess Zelda, nor Link if he was still alive will be a match for him.
Now that he has the power of all the Triforce, I don't think that ANYONE, the sages and Princess Zelda, nor Link if he was still alive will be a match for him.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARRGGGHHH!!!! Whyyyyy??? You are awsome, but why? Why leave us hanging? Who won? it's not that obvious for some of us, ya know. Also: why did queen zelda hafta die? she was flippin' awsome. However, I love how you have the whole dark link thing, like in Oot. Anyway, hurry up with that next chapter. I love your stories!!
<3
<3
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great and Very Good. I look forward to see how this all plays out.
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far, im enjoying it. Keep it up
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The concept of this fic is really interesting. The whole son/daughter dynamic leaves the future open for some interesting encounters. And the scene of Link watching Zelda's wedding? Heartrending.
There were a few spelling errors and it could possibly be a little longer. Don't be afraid to embellish and add some detail. Also, the timeline presented in the story was a little confusing. If you're going to be talking about events in the past, keep your key phrases uniform (like always saying "Three years ago" or "Three years prior," not switching it up in the middle).
This fic is going to turn out great, I can feel it. I can't wait to read more!
There were a few spelling errors and it could possibly be a little longer. Don't be afraid to embellish and add some detail. Also, the timeline presented in the story was a little confusing. If you're going to be talking about events in the past, keep your key phrases uniform (like always saying "Three years ago" or "Three years prior," not switching it up in the middle).
This fic is going to turn out great, I can feel it. I can't wait to read more!