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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! XD It has everything! Roxas and Axel are so meant to be together =3 I like the fact that they can't stand eachother XD So funny! ^^ Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter =3
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg...Update..Update NOW! this has got to be the BEST Axel x Roxas fic I've read so far, PLEASE UPDATE! and e-mail me when you do!
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Damn you for only have a few updates up. -pats back- not really. What was there was VERY entertaining. AHAHHA Roxy's getting wet dreams during the meetings. I died then. Anyway, I thought it was really well written and that everyone stays in character... (which is one of the hardest things to do in writing)
There's one thing I noticed that can be claimed false. Demyx's weapon, you dubbed it a "guitar"... it's actually a "Sitar" (which is like a cousin to the guitar... and is really damn hard to play. lol) Other than that, kick ass... -waves and throws confetti- update soon please.
There's one thing I noticed that can be claimed false. Demyx's weapon, you dubbed it a "guitar"... it's actually a "Sitar" (which is like a cousin to the guitar... and is really damn hard to play. lol) Other than that, kick ass... -waves and throws confetti- update soon please.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aawesome! I loved it!
If you do Gaia, email me for the link to my profile because I've quoted your Fanfiction...
...A lot...
If you do Gaia, email me for the link to my profile because I've quoted your Fanfiction...
...A lot...
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE AXEL AND ROXAS WERE MADE FOR EACHOTHER!!! >.<
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;w;!!! HOMAIGAWD!! I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this! XD *dies* I giggled and squealed so many times. xD I would have reviewed the other chapters, but my computer was being ghay. D: But yeah. I love how you explain Axel and Roxas's little moments! ;w; Your secks scenes were secksy. Tee hee. x3 sdjkfasdfjkls. Update! ;A; I'm keeping an eye on this. <3
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm....this is cute so far. I like it ^^ Please udate it soon, yes?
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY XD plz more more more more more more
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far. You have some really fun ideas and it's enjoyable to read. Good job with the smexy scenes so far!
You have to work on grammar though. Before putting the new chapter up, just run it through spellcheck and re-read it(or have a proofreader do it for you). Sometimes there's words missing. Try and make sure you use the same verb tense throughout.
But it's a good story! Can't wait for the next update. :D
You have to work on grammar though. Before putting the new chapter up, just run it through spellcheck and re-read it(or have a proofreader do it for you). Sometimes there's words missing. Try and make sure you use the same verb tense throughout.
But it's a good story! Can't wait for the next update. :D
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE keep writing! You write the most awesome fics I've ever read! The whole love/hate relationship is great, especially with teasing. I have a suggestion: Instead of going to have a cold shower, Axel goes to masturbate. And in the middle of it, Roxas walks in. Have fun with that idea.