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for Link and Aryll

by Moridin

schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...hm... can everyone just lay off the small children please? Pedophiles are bad enough as they are, you don't need to go rile them up more.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Professional, psychological help is available 24/7 through many anonymous hotlines. The most disgusting idea of all is that of children involved in sexual activity. Please, seek help. Once you do, step two is seeking a beta.
person Isaac
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Errm, I was gonna write something, but then I realized it was the same thing as the above person... -,-' lol.
person Anonymous
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here we have an author who can spell, who has a firm grip on syntax, and who has attitude! I really enjoyed reading the story, despite the fact that it's about incestual children. That's not quite my thing. But you seem like a great author; I look forward to reading more of your stories!
person Drake_Miriel
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, man. It's written fairly nicely, and I'm glad you went a little forward in time so she's not six. 8/10.
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude. Seek help. Immediately.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Could use more description.

Ignore that enigma moron.