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for Young Lust

by Moridin

schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! A little odd, especially Kyle's behavior, but it made a point, which makes it worth it. And the sex part was good.
person Mikaa
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is a little thing called hitting the return key inbetween paragraphs. That being said, this had promise, though I doubt Jenna was so willing (nevermind having sex), given her character in the games. Might want to add "OoC" to your description...