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for Suck me

by PandoraMasters

person piaZ
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, soft and sweet. I enjoy. I also like the little glimmers of humour present. That's always great. Nothing's better than laughing just before a big orgasm. Nice work! :)
person James
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems you do yuri as well, and I noticed it had by far the most hits. Of course, that is what draws most men. Two cute ladies sharing their sapphic sexual experiences...

But I digress. You are a highly accomplished writer. The detail was real and visible to the mind, making it easy to invision. I have noticed you seem to have this knack for ending at the moment right where your readers are expecting more. You make us crave more, and you are quickly becoming a favorite.

~James
person Name
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good read. Just like any other guy girl on girl is appealing to me. After reading the story I cannot want to get home to my girlfriend.
person Iesha
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an INCREDIBLY HOT chapter! I loved it, it was totally hot!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... o_o best fic ever.

9\9
person BJ
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Toys? Oh no! That's crossing over into what I'm not really into. This was..... nice, to say the least, however. *fans self* I'd use the word "HAWT" if it were in my vocabulary, V, how about that? *g*
person Zone
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, those chapters were really well done, honestly they were :D. At first it was very delicate and fun in a tender way, but it soon took on a more intimate intensity and from there, well... Fire and glass, they just burned one another up with the hottest, deepest touches, it was, powerful, excellent writing ^^!
person mysteryman
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, it's a good set up scene and a bit of emotional bonding going on. Great reading. :D
person mysteryman
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was nice and hot. Nicely written for something that was done so quickly. =D
person mysteryman
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. :D Very hot indeed, you've got a knack for doing this when you're on form. xD