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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your chapter titles, you dirty girl. XD
And that part about Jill, taken out of context, it's wrong on so many levels.xD
I really liked the violent sex. X3
And that part about Jill, taken out of context, it's wrong on so many levels.xD
I really liked the violent sex. X3
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems you write yaoi too. This was a highly refreshing breath of fresh air from the usual yaoi I've read on this and other sites before. Both men maintained their personalities, and you didn't make Chris a uke to the point that he almost becomes a female.
That is the problem with many yaoi writers. They get the idea from tv and anime that there is always one masculine and one feminine gay in the relationship, when in actuallity, that is not so. Being bisexual myself and currently in a relationship with another man, I can clearly say that neither of us are 'girly'.
Sorry for the rant. I know you are busy with your other fan fics, but I wouldn't mind reading a bit more. Good yaoi is hard to come by.
~James
That is the problem with many yaoi writers. They get the idea from tv and anime that there is always one masculine and one feminine gay in the relationship, when in actuallity, that is not so. Being bisexual myself and currently in a relationship with another man, I can clearly say that neither of us are 'girly'.
Sorry for the rant. I know you are busy with your other fan fics, but I wouldn't mind reading a bit more. Good yaoi is hard to come by.
~James
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short, graphic. Make it longer next time. >O And maybe more foreplay. xD
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
huhuhu hope that Christ will like it someday hehehe >w< what a good brother, did that for sister??? Lier!! hahaha!!!!