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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much! One of my favorite fanfictions, that's for sure! You made Lucifer very in character. I also enjoyed how you added Dante and Futomimi, even if it was a brief section. ^^
Very good job! I really hope you write more of this pairing!!
Very good job! I really hope you write more of this pairing!!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good enough, if only because its an actual Fanfic for SMT (something I've planned to start writing something eventually.
Despite the rampant homoerotica, its not bad. Well-written, and definately a dooable pairing. Lucifer having sex with new demons seems somewhat in character for him. I also liked, to a degree, that you gave the characters of Dante and Futomimi some personality in the actual party.
All in all, a good effort.
Despite the rampant homoerotica, its not bad. Well-written, and definately a dooable pairing. Lucifer having sex with new demons seems somewhat in character for him. I also liked, to a degree, that you gave the characters of Dante and Futomimi some personality in the actual party.
All in all, a good effort.