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for Punishing the Superior

by Nurexla

person anonymous
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really excellently written. The attraction (I would call it -feelings-, but those are reserved for beings with hearts, right? ;p ) Xemnas has for Saix is palpable. I could -feel- it. Looking forward to more of this!
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really awesome i love it nd like dark light said u have no reason to be nervous!!! your writings really good!!! anyway continue please i'm really looking foward to reading more. :)
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH THAT'S SO TWISTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD I can't really think of anythng constructively helpful to say about it, it was that good. Seriously. I want more!!
person A
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AGSHJDHJK!!!~! i can't believe it ended there!! lmao, srsly- i was so into it and then XIGBAR and i was about to have a mini joygasm and then BAM, that's it. D: God do I need you to continue this. This is the first time that I have EVER seen xemnas in a ukeish position and I LOVE IT. I'm a sucker for those.. role reversal type of things. Anyhow, this was written really well and I'm DYING TO READ MORE OF IT!!! *implodes* 8D Thank you for the wonderful fic!
person hungrypankake
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN!!! ESTA MUY BIEN!! Continue with the story now D:<
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Orgycest is teh sex~
I haven't read something from Xemnas' view before...it was good ^_^
I didn't see any mistakes in spelling or grammar (but I'm not very good at concrit)
More please? It was well-written~
person Crimson_Enigma
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, are you sure that you're not actually Xemnas or something? Your characterization of him is so awesome, I've definitely gotta say. XD Amazingly written story thus far and I look forward to more chapters! :3