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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked how in depth you were with Xemnas' pov. It almost sounded like what Xemnas would say or at least how say things in very descriptive way. Also the last part, very funny, I was wondering when you would get to Xigbar. I hope the story will focus less on Xemnas' relationship with Saix and more on his new love relationship with Xigbar. Whether you plan to put Xigbar on top or bottom is fine with me. (Though I would prefer if you had Xigbar as the uke. X3)
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is nicely written. A bit different from what I normally see, and I like it. ^.^ You're doing a great job; I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I get the feeling I'm going to look over my shoulder and see Xemnas. This was superb, spot on characterization of the man, from the language to his fondness for his own body. And the speaking to Kingdom Hearts. Just 10/10 material.
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.> Damn that was hot. XD; Especially amazingly done for first person... It's such a hard perspective to write in, and especially, for me at least, to keep in proper character doing. When I end up in first person, I always want to write with my own personality... Anyway <3 Well done. Hope an update turns up at one point, but it's been awhile, and I doubt it will XD;
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this. It's very hard to write Xemnas in character, but I think you did it perfectly. Lovely description and flow, I'll look out for the next chapter!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww XP
The only complaint I have is that it stopped just when Xemnas found out it was Xigbar XD It was gettin' good
other than that, LOVELY piece of work ^.^
The only complaint I have is that it stopped just when Xemnas found out it was Xigbar XD It was gettin' good
other than that, LOVELY piece of work ^.^
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update! The suspense is killing me!
Please? Please?
Please? Please?
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds pretty good. So, this is sort of like a journal Xemnas is writing? Pretty cool, and I must say, you use excellent detail and vocabulary. I hope you get the feedback you need and you update soon. I'll be waiting.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, uhh...are you still writing this? because i reaalllllyyy really really want to see where it's going (you're, like, the only person to ever do a xig/xemnas fic. ever). and it's really good so far, and just...yeah. i hope you continue. :p
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW I really love it, and I love how you wrote it, but the little notes to Saix randomly thrown in were my favorite part!!! That was so sweet! I really really hate Xemnas, but this story had me able to stand him so I hope that you update soon?! x3 Please!! Aww it was so cute, and sounded like everything else Xemnas wrote so it was great x3