rate_review Reviews

This story is one of the best of all I've ever read.
You created very impressing character of Eva, strong, decent and high-spirited. Now, there's no doubt for me why Sparda chose her. The last chapter made me tear up. You're very talented, and I hope you'll have a lot of great ideas for fics.
What about writing a novel? ^_^

I'm really impressed. Portraying Eva as a fanatic Christian who is being eaten up by her doubts is a great and interesting idea, but hard to write down. However you did perfectly. Your love-hate-relationship is that realistic I catched myself on hating Sparda for hurting Eva. Your're detailed description of their life let them seem like they're real, living persons.

Well I wouldn't call that rape, but a good lemon-esque scene nonetheless.

There; completely up to date with this story. This is perhaps my second favorite of yours, Rapture stealing first... Can't wait to read more.

Very interesting chapter. I'm glad to see some progress in their .... dare I say "relationship?" haha.. either way, thank you for updating this. It's very good.

Solstice

Very unique Laryna! I'm honestly a tad blown away. It's the polar opposite of your other, that's for certain. And while I'm with you in seeing this version as a tad cruel and detached (as it is) I still think you're doing a bang up job out of your comfort zone. It is a true author that can take a version of something they don't even like and make it into something very beautiful.

I think what WOULD be nice is delving a tad more into the characters. Yes, we know that Sparda is Sparda and feels bad and wants Eva to like him (sorta) and we know that Eva is pissed, IGNORANTLY faithful (sorry, not a big faith fan myself haha) and hates herself AND Sparda.. but I would really like to know more about them as people. What was her past really like? Was she ever in love or was she always so naive?

I'm kinda feeling like I'm not getting close to her (probably the religious thing though hahah, not really your fault) and despite his beauty, I'm not really taken in with Sparda yet.

So I do think it would be a nice treat to read a little more about them as day to day people but if not, either way, it is a GOOD story and you can just BET I'll be about to read it! Thanks babe!

defnitnely different Sparda/Eva fic where Sparda actually rapes Eva. Thats dark enough for me alright.

whoooooaaaaa...

this is a VERY interesting fic....the idea was very unique....

its very weird cuz you WANT to hate sparda and yet you kinda have a hard time hating him...of course what he did was COMPLETLY WRONG and.....

anywho very good job on this fic

Omg, this story is cool please continue. No offfence i was a bit torn away from the whole religion thing. I believe but not as much. Maybe it's the fact that i don't think Eva is a religious person to that extent. Not only that but she's being a total bitch, i understand what Sparda did. It was a bit odd but she should be greatfull that he's even taking care of her instead of just dumping her somewhere. Then again im sure she would kill herself if he let her go. Keep up the good work i really like it.

Chyeah I followed you to AFFN.Net. It is mildly disturbing, but don't worry, there's a lot worse. o_O Great chapter.

I'm confused as to why she has to be cut up, because he wants her to hate more, or to brace for the pain? Sorry if I'm just being stupid. XP