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WHOAAA, UPDATE! DX This is hawt. xD

haha. Even in chains dantes still funny as ever..and oh so vaaaaain!! Do continue

Oh i hope you continue

Wow, that was awesome! I totally loved it!! Awesome work, mate!! ^_^*

Take care,
Belle

Hey there. Been a while since I've reviewed anything (I keep forgetting). However, I know you're a good writer, and this story interested me.

Honestly, I think this style of story suits you best - the sort where it's sexy, but not particularly graphic. You write "mind games" very well, and it's something that I envy. The breakdown into submission... it's a tough concept to portray well, and you've managed it nicely.

Hmm... well, my thoughts are a bit scattered right now, but the bottom line is that this is a very good story, and I just wanted to let you know that.


- Jen

Ahhh Laryna. You always make every story you write so beautiful. Truly, you have an immense gift for making even the sometimes considered "dirty" act of sex between the twins a poem in itself. Your descriptions are wonderful as always and the flow of your sentences is in a word, flawless.

I loved your Eva/Sparda story (this is Camaro from ffnet by the way) and ever since, I really find myself looking forward to anything you choose to post for us, be it a pwp (which I admittedly am not much a fan of, excluding you of course) a one-shot or a long story. You continue to inspire me babe, thank you.

Camaro/Solstice

Yes! Thank you! I do so love the way you do Vergil, especially when paired with...anybody, really, but Dante in particular. The level of his delusion combined with his possiveness and arrogance all flows together so nicely. The soul-embracing thing is what really stood out for me, as it's just so demonic, so Vergil. How do you fight someone who's mucking around in your soul? You don't, that's how. Also? Very hot. I owe you for this one, chica.