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for Hump de Bump

by DiamondMask

person Silvara
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that was deliciously hot!One of the best DantexVergil smutty fics I've read in a while
(gotta say that Vergil submitting to Dante is a plus!). This goes straight to my faves ;)
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WUVS THIS STORY!!
person Ultima
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya. I read this, and I liked the idea, so I thought I'd leave a review.

You're right, Vergil is a bit out of character, but it's not too bad. I could definitely see him having that kind of sensuality and anger in the right situation. I think it was just the language that made him seem a little off.

Otherwise, I loved your descriptions. You were detailed and pretty realistic about everything. Overall, everyone needs a little bondage every once in a while, yes? ^_~


- Jen
person teddybomber
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!! that is the most hottest shit I've ever read!! long live danteXvergil fanfics. I'm not worthy I'm not worthy! hahaha! Seriously this fic has everything. bondage, sadistic and masochist charaters(always hot), begging, cute ending. I'm telling you everything. so thanks so much for writting such a cool fic and posting it. hehe! I love you forever. Yay! you now have a crazed fan who loves your work. Well toodles! ~*teddybomber