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for Light Within

by Niffty24

schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good! although my inner zelloyd fangirl is berating me for actually reading kratosxzelos.. xD but i really love this plot, with yggdrasill being freaking super evil and just wow. i feel so bad for zelos
wishing there was more to this ^^ this is an awesome story! <3
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written and very sweet. I especially liked the line 'How many people could one man protect without breaking?' Not sure if I agree entirely with the dynamics with the Kratos X Yggy scene, but the rest of it I like and agree with. Nicely done
person Henako
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful
Please continue.
I love how you've efortlessly gathered in some facutal parts of the game as parts of the story.
Except for a small amount of vaugeness, and spelling errors, this story scrapes the surface of perfect
Can't wait until the next chapter,
~Harlequin, The Masked Deciever
person Robyn
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has pretty much everything I could want in a story. O_O PRETTY PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! :D
person Loli
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to continue this! Its so sad! Poor Kratos! ;_;
person Sylvia Viridian
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!111!one! THis fic is, like, so *ttly* awesome!! Plz continue soon!!!




...Gomen, I couldn't help myself. ^_^; Seriously, though, post more soon so that I can narcissistically read over my own work? <333