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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this a joke??? I hope it is, because it was realy poorly writtren.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's me Again yes finally a Megaman Fan fiction that's not Yaoi (by the way Yaoi is Evil)
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! oh snnap that's rich man hurry and make the next chapter!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny and surprising. I love this. I was wondering why you said that Lan was wearing a bra. Im like, what the hell? Than I read more and I went, OHhhh. So fuunny.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By chance is english a second language for you?
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor megaman it looks its gonna be nice i cant wait to see how protoman gonna react hope to see another chapter soon
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read the other reviews they were too harsh well the grammer may need a little improovment but nobodies perfect i believe you will get better with time and really your story isnt bad its intresting idea having mega pregnant with prooman kids cant imagine him actind as a dad you should write you know with time im sure youll get better and getmoore reviews well good luck dont worry much about what the reviews said people could be too critical sometimes im sure you will be able to proove them wrong as they say if you fail try ad try again
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD.
*cringes at the horrible spelling and grammar*
Please, get a spellcheck and/or a beta reader!
Also signal it's an A/U (Alternate Universe) because Lan is a girl.
You nearly got me to cry at your badfic. Make an effort, and stop using the "script" mode abusively. Next, start refering to Lan as a "she", because that's what she is in the fic. No penis, a vagina, and breasts means it's a girl, so don't refer as a 'him' anymore. Navis are programs. They cannot be born, they get created and programmed (although they live in cyberworld, which means they can interact between themselves, due to the simple fact they're on the same frequency).
For every reader's sake, don't write any other fic until you get better. Honestly, I've seen 12-years-old girls spelling better. And they didn't use the script mode.
~Neo
*cringes at the horrible spelling and grammar*
Please, get a spellcheck and/or a beta reader!
Also signal it's an A/U (Alternate Universe) because Lan is a girl.
You nearly got me to cry at your badfic. Make an effort, and stop using the "script" mode abusively. Next, start refering to Lan as a "she", because that's what she is in the fic. No penis, a vagina, and breasts means it's a girl, so don't refer as a 'him' anymore. Navis are programs. They cannot be born, they get created and programmed (although they live in cyberworld, which means they can interact between themselves, due to the simple fact they're on the same frequency).
For every reader's sake, don't write any other fic until you get better. Honestly, I've seen 12-years-old girls spelling better. And they didn't use the script mode.
~Neo
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad someone started to write this story. Keep going ok.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay, it's both really interesting and really funny. I really like your little twist with Lan. Keep up the good work.