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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man. MORE MORE MORE. I WANT MORE!
beautiful story so far.
beautiful story so far.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though the sheer quantity of twincest fics (not to mention 'bad quality twincest fics') has made me sick of the genre...
...this is actually quite well writen as a piece of fiction! I have to compliment you on this, friend, you definately have worked a lot on this story. The gramar, syntax and structure is taken good care of, and that's usually one of my greatest gripes about fan-fiction. Really now, so many wannabe writers don't give squat about the sanity of others. *sigh* But that's hardly a problem with this story, so its all good.
The characters are pretty well-developed, and maintain their original personalities, for the most. At least, they work well within the context of the story. There's a few rather OOC parts that made me wince, but they're minor, so I guess I can let that pass without guilt.
An okay story overall, I suppose, even though its yet another twincest fic. The straight scenes, and the good writing sorta make it easier to tolerate, though. I've been reading all the comments on it though, and I gotta shake my head at the immaturity of some noobs... Its kinda sad. I see the story's been around for a while, but still... so many arguments-- and so many fans. Huh. And my poor story's only been reviewed by my close friends, noone else... what's a non-yaoi writer gotta do to get some feedback around here...? o_o
Don't misjudge me, please, I'm merely wondering...
...this is actually quite well writen as a piece of fiction! I have to compliment you on this, friend, you definately have worked a lot on this story. The gramar, syntax and structure is taken good care of, and that's usually one of my greatest gripes about fan-fiction. Really now, so many wannabe writers don't give squat about the sanity of others. *sigh* But that's hardly a problem with this story, so its all good.
The characters are pretty well-developed, and maintain their original personalities, for the most. At least, they work well within the context of the story. There's a few rather OOC parts that made me wince, but they're minor, so I guess I can let that pass without guilt.
An okay story overall, I suppose, even though its yet another twincest fic. The straight scenes, and the good writing sorta make it easier to tolerate, though. I've been reading all the comments on it though, and I gotta shake my head at the immaturity of some noobs... Its kinda sad. I see the story's been around for a while, but still... so many arguments-- and so many fans. Huh. And my poor story's only been reviewed by my close friends, noone else... what's a non-yaoi writer gotta do to get some feedback around here...? o_o
Don't misjudge me, please, I'm merely wondering...
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continuuuuuueeeee.
I'm enjoying this too much for it to be another incomplete fic.
I'm enjoying this too much for it to be another incomplete fic.
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first thing I'm going to say is I'm deeply disappointed to see the way that readers on this site have been treating you and your story. I would think that, considering this is an R/NC-17 archive, we'd all be ADULTS here, but apparently not.
The second thing I want to say is that I am a Vergil fan, and I don't believe that this story is bashing him in any way. It's an AU, and a very interesting and original one at that. I hope to see more chapters go up, and I will continue reading them as long as they do. I think that your writing style is very reminiscient of the mood and atmosphere of the game itself - dark, gritty, gothic, and beautiful. Keep up the good work, and ignore the infantile comments.
The second thing I want to say is that I am a Vergil fan, and I don't believe that this story is bashing him in any way. It's an AU, and a very interesting and original one at that. I hope to see more chapters go up, and I will continue reading them as long as they do. I think that your writing style is very reminiscient of the mood and atmosphere of the game itself - dark, gritty, gothic, and beautiful. Keep up the good work, and ignore the infantile comments.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow.O_O!!!!
Please write more the whole story is amzaing and the interacts between them awsome ^-^
And I hope you do update soon because for some reason all the storys I love never get updated...-_-;;
Please write more the whole story is amzaing and the interacts between them awsome ^-^
And I hope you do update soon because for some reason all the storys I love never get updated...-_-;;
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awesome awesome story. Your descriptions are amazing and such a great story! Please keep it up.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I love this. *reading this fic ALWAYS for some time* When are you going to write more?
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, I hope you continue the story. I'm really enjoying reading the work. C:
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now this is some great work!
I just love how your brought out the thoughts of turmoil going through Dante's head and the Sadist Vergil out to play! I soo look forward to more chapters! Keep up the great work!
I just love how your brought out the thoughts of turmoil going through Dante's head and the Sadist Vergil out to play! I soo look forward to more chapters! Keep up the great work!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this so much! this is by far the BEST DMC fanfic i have Ever read!