rate_review Reviews

You know, I expected this to be one of those raunchy kind of smut. But you actually surprised me! Yours is more tastefully done, you actually wrote a sex fic without including crude words. I always thought that vulgar words should never belong to any work of fiction, be it sex fic or not. So yeah, you can say I'm quite impressed.

You know, I hadn't thought it would be good, considering how pure and innocent I figured Alice to be. You did a nice job of convincing me otherwise. Aside from the nice sex scene the writing on how he described his feelings were great. Wanna write some more shadow hearts smut? Please? Keep up the writing, well done.