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This is a piece of fanfiction that must be continued, is Rayne gonna get raped or not?

Well this is interesting, I look foreward to the next chapter.

Sorry for the lateness between chapters.

I like reviewers who tell me where I screw up (the rope is tying her legs together. Remember, she kicks hard).

Now, as far as becoming a whimpering slut or getting out of the situation, well, while I don't know where I am going completely I do have several stages planned out for the next three chapters. Just wait and see.

Interesting opening, if a bit short. So far, there's not really a whole lot to go on to make any kind of statement about this fic. It's decently written I suppose, yet somehow it lacks true impact somehow. More chapters should hopefully change that. There's also insufficient description of just how Rayne is suspended with rope. She *is* suspended with rope, right? And if she is suspended by rope, why would there be a need for additional rope to keep her legs from moving? You'd think the whole '(presumably) suspended in the air' thing would've taken care of that in the first place.

Also, I think the previous two reviewers are jumping to conclusions here, if based solely of this rather sparse first chapter. After all, while there was some torture, Rayne is far from being a 'broken and whimpering slut'. Chances are, she'll be able to turn the tables on the good doctor. Especially if the only thing keeping her is some rope.

I love it, please write more. The really powerfull ones like Rayne, being turned into a tortured slut, are always the hottest fantasys, I guess cause we know they'd never be real, and we'd never want em to be. So I look forward to more !

Please write more soon! Seeing someone as hot and powerfull as Rayne tortured and broken into a whimpering slut is a series i'd love to read. Fantasy's like this are always the best to me, I guess because we'd never do it ourselves. Looking forward to more !