rate_review Reviews

I wonder if Devil Jin well show him self again so what is going to happen now?

I think this is coming out rather well. I enjoyed seeing sex scenes that weren't simply the two tearing each other apart in hot man-sex, but they actually seem to treat each other like lovers, making jokes and *enjoying* each other completely, almost even worshipping one another. Keep up the good work.

Just one thing to say: I love Rang's sense of humor!!!! He's like my brother!!!

Yay! Update! Good stuff. Yummy...

Wow... I haven't checked the Tekken section in a while. I really enjoy your story. I'll have to check back here more often for updates.

NO NO NO!! THEY R NOT GAY. SHIT!!
GOOD STORY!! BUT THEY R NOT GAY!!

Still good :) Waiting for more Yaoi :)

I like it, and I'm gonna continue to watch for updates :) You better write more, or I'll come and shove my muses into your head to help your muses ;) That should be a threat enoughm my musus are crazy! Nah I'm just kidding, but please update, will you?

Sorry for waisting review space, but I have to say one thing that I forgot to add:

YAY, KISSING!!! :) lol

I do like it... I do, but I thought that was a bit weird, making Jin prove his love by sucking Hwoarang off... Haven't you heard of kissing? And if so, shouldn't Hwoarang return the favour...? He did say so himself that he loved Jin in the second chapter. Or is Hwoarang gonna be a insecure prat in this one where he royally screws up before anything goes the right way? Oh, and I did like the voiced in Jin's head... They were pretty neat, i'm just thinking that it would be cool if the Devil, Jun and Jin came to an agreement of some sorts... But that's probably way too farfetched... Anyway, good story, and good grammar, I like it very much. But do you think you could be a bit more descriptive in the lemon-lime scenes?? I'd love to read the continuation, so please keep the chapers coming. :) Ohh, BTW Who's uke and Who's seme??