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for Deeds Undone

by Mike256bit

person Cyclone
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome Arcadia fic. Like the story so far, hope to see another update soon!
person Gelgarin
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is shaping up to be one of the best plotted stories I've read in quite a long time here, I particually like the portryal of Lawrance (I allways like the sullen loner).
Itmightn't of hurt to have split this chapter up as I did find it a tad long for a single sitting, allthough I read it that way anyway since it was so good.
Looking forward to chapter three.

Oh, and is this black moon crystal the same as the discovery found in the dark rift or something different?
person Applecore
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, good Skies of Arcadia fic. I'm going to keep an eye on this.
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... woah. I am honestly floored by your writing: everything flows to gether, not a single word wasted. Add that to the incredible scope this story is showing just in the first chapter... it's amazing. Very nice work, and eagerly awaiting more!
person Gelgarin
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hazza! An epic skies of arvadia fick, fantastic.
Cant wait for future chapters.