rate_review Reviews

I love this story for some reason, but I never got around to reviewing it. I guess that's just my incestual side speaking. It's a shame you don't enjoy writing het, else I'd ask you to write a few more chapters. Whatever the case, I'm just here to sing the praises of this little piece of fiction. Very nicely done, well written, short, sweet and to the point.

awesome

Too much "cock".

As far as one-on-one het scenes go, there’s no new ground broken or clever reinventing going on, but that’s not required at all. A very enjoyable vignette and a nice quick read. Effective, without much setup, which is something to be proud of. Reading the story alone, I would not get the impression that het scenes fail to wave your flag.

Again, no real complaints that wouldn’t make me sound overly picky. You know where you want to go with these stories, and then you go there. Can’t think of anything “deeper” to say than that.

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My favorite part would be Erika making good use of her two forward assets.
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I'll be damned if I didn't read this fic. And the very fact that I just love Eirika/Ephraim, I just had to review.

Good job once again, man. As far as I can tell, you didn't mess up at all. Nicely written, looks like you can write het as well as you can write Yuri. Hehehe, if you want to countinue, it's up to you. ^_^ 5/5. Keep up the good work.

It appears that your abilites aren't limited to Yuri.

I particularly liked how you portrayed the twins, as real human beings rather than sex-obsessed maniancs as they might become in the hands of so many other authors on this site.

Now, fortunately for Eirika, L'arachel seems the type to be into threesomes, but that's entirely besides the point.

Very nice. :)

You didn't mess up that much. I think this should be a multichapter story though. I mean, who will Eirika marry?

Multichapter? But then I'd have to continue writing het! I don't think I'll be able to take that. Besides, Jill and Lethe are once again yelling at me to write about them. Not to mention Lana and Ema.

Anyways...

As for who Eirika will marry, I think the whole point of the story is that... uhm... that might be considered spoilers for this fic. But if you read it through, hopefully, you'll be able to figure out what Eirika's intentions are. It shouldn't take too long, after all. ;)

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And now I have an idea for Chapter 2. Dammit.

Ehehehe. I have that way with people. Hey Jill and Lethe (If I spelled it correctly), how about Jill be dominating just this once? (Gets a hiss) What? I said only one time! Besides, I'd love to know all the kinky things Jill would do with you. (Makes Lethe blush a deep red)