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This is some excellent stuff. I agree with JACE, though--the Prince/Kisara/Lun scene is just BEGGING to be written. And in great detail. :)

Nice chapter!.. though I love the first part of the previous chapter and I was kinda hoping to see the continuation on the prince/Kisara/Lun encounter. Even more so after reading the beginning of chapter 7. Perhaps there'll be a recap of missing chapters later. :P

However, Zerase is an overlooked character and I think this is the first time I've seen her in a fic. Her mysterious appearance is well anticipated yet who knew she could be so sexual despite not being promiscuous. I find Zerase's sudden hesitation just before the sex a little odd though. She's in control all along seducing him and all and then she suddenly it seems like she changes her mind. It's still a very hot and solid piece which I hope to see continued! Just out of curiosity, did you see my interpretation of Backroom Antics p.2?

hey great to see your stuff again

Awesome. Good word, methinks. But still, I like the incest, personally, because I played the game and thought "Wow. Milf mom, sexy aunt and cute as a button bodyguard.... game on". Give me my Sialeeds, Jeane/Josephine + Prince combo and I will worship you as a demigod. End quote

I miss seeing new updates I hope you haven't gave up on this

I miss your stuff please start writing again

I would love to sees me some Zerase. I can't wait

Hey love the fic it get's better every chapter. now how about Lucretia and Lelei tutoring The Prince in the ways of getting a women off also I say Lucretia would be good regular women for the Prince sure she's got some years over him but that what makes it good plus I could easy see her offering herself to him.

Very nice work with the Sialeeds & Lyon scene also Like that Lun walk in on her Mom and the Prince I don't know if you done that because I suggested it or you had already plan to do it but anyway I'm sure it'll lead to funny results. btw have you decided yet on who you're going to make the Prince's steady girlfriend?

What I like about this chapter,

Once again the background details that really bring the castle and its environment to life...such as mentioning the fishing boats moving up river to follow the fish...a small thing but important nonetheless. I especially liked the mention of Lun and Murad's interactions, very amusing.

I like the paragraph where shapes could be seen in the window and how it makes you think there already having sex. Nice tease...

Your attempts at visually displaying the story are again great. I particularly remember now just thinking about it, that trickle of sweat running down Kisara's breast. These little details once again show the care you put into your story.

I also love how you portrayed Kisara...very believably....and very hot.


I also enjoyed the Lyon and Sialeeds section and I'm glad you discussed Lyon's relationship with the Prince. I still think its kind of strange that he's running around without her as the game shows they are very rarely seperated but I can see how always having Lyon could limit your freedom and its an understandable decision.

I have to say I almost stopped reading with the whole Sialeeds tying Lyon up thing. That's just not my bag....But I stuck with it and I'm glad I did. You created another very sexy scene.

I couldn't help but wish the Kisara scene was longer however.

In any event, I'm looking forward to your next chapter especially Zerase. I'm planning on including more of her in mine but certainly not as the main focus.

Keep up the awesome work!