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January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved your story :)
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. The story was amazing over all, but the thing I love most about this story is the fact that you depicted Vaati as a human as opposed to a giant floating eyeball. Keep up the good work, and you should definatly continue. It would be interesting to see what would happen after Zelda returned to Hyrule Castle from where she was taken(Vaati's Palace).
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was an awesome read. There are quite a few errors, I think... Things like Zelda's first line of dialogue where there should be a comma before Vaati's name, and here: '"Vaati," She said, with a hint of desperately in her voice' when desperation is probably a better word to use... But this world lacks good Vaati fic, I think, and good Vaati sex is even better. You said this was just the bare bones of it? I'd like to see it fleshed out a bit! More along this vein would be really, really appreciated from this corner. ^.~
Regards,
GarnetStar
Regards,
GarnetStar
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Creamios Demos Agio comprehende no?
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good...
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thia was really good! please continue
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! You should continue!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what?
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the angels came down to praise Tree007. That's about how I describe this story. It was great, and I would love to see more.