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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read. *claps*
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Everyone was in charactor, the plot was not to fast and not too slow and there were no glaringly obvious grammatical errors. It was wonderful!!!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I read this on ff.net a while ago and loved it. I was sad to see that here it only had two reviews! Horribleness. I thought that the way you worked the story and time-continuim details was absolutely original. It was nice to have a fresh take on Sheik-as-a-male that actually involved a plot and forethought that most authors bypass in favor of hot!yaoi!action. I especially liked that it was a complete, if incredibly long, oneshot [?] story.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this has been the first fanfict I have ever reviewed. it was just so great, I loved all the characters and your writing style. plz never stop writing, this story made me spend the last two hours reading non-stop , it was so addictive I just couldn't take my eyes of it. the quotes were perfect, there wasn't one I found out of context. hope to see more of your work.
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has just become one of my favorite fanfics ever. I spent a few straight hours just sitting here reading it, and I know I'll be rereading it again soon. I must say, the quotes were just lovely even if I didn't understand most of them. Your writing style is utterly beautiful. For with some stories they have a decent plot and interesting things happening, only the writter has an odd way of boring me, yet this was most definitely not so with your story! You even managed to fit in OCs into the story that didn't leave me cringing at the rape, for lack of a more appopriate word, of the world's puriety. Wow, this is actually one of the first in depth reviews I've left in a long time. Just know that I loved Maktub, and am unable to find a single thing I'd deem wrong with it. Though the fangirl in me screamed for more yaoi moments, but that's bound to happen in any story that has content other than lemons or limes. *giggles* <3