rate_review Reviews

Ooops, forgot to mention this... I'm personally a huge fan of Riku x Sora (as long as it's written properly... which unfortunately, most authors can't manage... you'd pull it off beautifully, though =D), but a good author can make anything work, as you've proven with Ansem x Sora. Please update soon! <3

Woot, an update. =D Wonderful as always, keep them coming!

This....whoa. I don't think there are words for how talented you right. How perfect you make everything sound...and well, just how hot every sex part was! This is the first time AxR was done right!!! ^O^ Howly cow that was something else. I sure hope there will be more of that...and Demyx later on!...*Prais for AnsemxRiku* Keep up the amazing work!

Wow, this fic is /really/ well written ^^
I enjoyed reading it.
I'd love to read more though.

This is bloody brilliant, you're a genius! Not only are the chapters written extremely well, they are nicely lengthed with just the right amount of description. You've made Sora and Roxas appear in character, but also with an odd sort of dazed innocence. Please update this soon, I absolutely LOVE you *worships*

I love Axel/Roxas too and adored that little bathtub scene, you're right...it is quite...stimulating ::grins:: More more, Yami needs more

My favorite S/M fic EVER! And I've read alot of them. Alot of authors just use the S/M factor to lure out unsuspecting readers that theyre gonna read something interesting, and its usually just fake or really badly written. YOURS is what I would define as S/M and the fact that its not AU makes it all the more better and sexy. The kinky positions in chapter 1 is really what got me hooked, and now we got a sekrit AkuRoku Ehh >v> now that adds to another point why Ansem wouldn't want a caretaker. All of these elements you're adding in including Riku's obliviousness and Axel's secret relationship make everything so intense and suspenseful. I was just WAITING for the moment that Xemnas would catch them doing it, but I was so thankful it didn't happen XD The plot you have is just so much well built!

I really can't wait for the next chapter!

-Dedicated Reader, Vaed

Whoa, hoooot -drools- And noooo, Riku, don't gooooo!!!!

Very well written! I am intrigued by Riku showing up in the library, would you be able to write more about that perchance?

So wrong, but so very, very, very, very hot! Wonderful!!!