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Oh, Please please please continue this! *begs shamelessly* I absolutely adore your writing style, and I'm really anxious to see where you take this story. A couple chapters back you asked if people thought it should be RikuxSora eventually; I would be ALL for that. If Roxas and Axel get to have some luvin' it's only fair that Riku should be able to too. You also said that the fic would be getting darker, personally, I'm all for darker so long as there's some sort of happy ending...anyways, I am but a humble reviewer whose opinions are of no consequence *bows and backs away*

May the yaoi muse be with you~!
~Miranda

Please continue to write this story.

I like this story so far. I feel it has potential and while I only just read it, and haven't been waiting for an update like others, I think it would be awesome if you write more. I'll keep reading it. Its not cliched and it's not boring. I think it's wonderful so far.

Yes, terrible, of course I want more! XD Oh that was indeed delightful. It is terrible to see poor little Sora abused, but hey, he likes it. X3 Willing or not. Brilliantly written. The feelings and emotions were right out there. Gorgeous. <3

So vote...hot or not? HOT! More or nah? MORE! We would be happy and like it, if you continued writing this and updating. THANK YOU.

can you please update 'cause i want to read more Ansem/Sora.

I found this over at MM.Org w/only 2 chapters. After looking at your other posted stories and one-shots here [AFF.Net] I judge that you are still alive.

If this is so, then I’m begging you to continue this, please!

I love the twist you’re putting on things, and how slowly this is moving. Not having the Nobodies be ‘shadows’ of others . . . what would they be then? Ah, I probably would have made Ansem and Xemnas brothers, but that’s me and if you’ve changed the past a little . . .

Mmm, so Riku is just out of synch with the rest of reality? Does this have anything to do with the fact that Ansem is using his body as a vessel? It makes me think that if you could excite Riku with a strong enough stimulant that Ansem's form would waver--or maybe you would have to excite Riku through the body Ansem’s using. . . Ah, sorry, better wording . . . I wonder if there is a very, very, very weak mental connection between Riku and Ansem, over which information sometimes spills. Meh, but I digress . . .

So far, everything looks to be well thought out and the execution is stunning. I also love Ansem's personality in this, it’s so strong and well developed, and you don’t really get that a-lot for him in fics. Mmm, well I’m always up for a little RikuxSora, so if you can work it in without breaking the plot in two, go for it.

Ah, the bathroom scene with Axel and Roxas was soooo tender, and sweet, and soooooooooooo pathetically-sad at the end. It was so beautiful and so devastating when Roxas says he wants to ‘keep it’. Tore my heart up, really.

I’m just really addicted and want to see more of this.

Write some, eventually? Please?

Wow, I love this story so much. it's definately going on my favorites...

UPDATE KITTEH UPDATE!

What's happened to Riku? The whole concept of his mind being trapped in another dimension is fascinating! His fragile hope of Sora coming to rescue him... well, actually, you said he's lost hope of that happening, now, but still, you can faintly see a hint of the remnants of that hope in how Riku still bothers to dress himself each morning, just in case Sora comes to take him home. I really can't wait to see where you go with this! Your descriptions of Riku in the library, completely unresponsive to Sora was just hearbreaking! I can't wait till you update again, hahaha. =D